love this story so far please keep up the great work i look forward to reading more please ~! this story is seriously punching my funny bone so bad im crying from laughing at parts please keep up the great work i hope to read more of this soon please!

Aw man, blowing up an ice cream shop is just rude. It's just rude. There's no call for that.

Well. That happened. Now what?

Just realised you told us Emma had powers and I did not notice before. The Simurgh calls her trauma a trigger event, and this was before you told us about her seeing the tl strength of the potential powers people could have. Cool detail

Okay. I love her breaking sophia

Can’t wait to see the next chapter

Can’t wait to see the next chapter

Love love love

Piggot growls, "Explain yourself, Armsmaster!"
"It was just a misunderstanding," replies the tinker whose armored power suit has been reduced to a metallic banana hammock in his trademark colors.

From what I've seen, most voice to text programs excel at picking the wrong homophone word you have to triple check them throughout your document to make sure it didn't use "peak" wherever you meant "peek" or something like that.

It was most amusing.

Friendbringer Emma? Now that's a twist!

So glad this isn't dead so I'll just be over here in the corner crouched like golem *Waiting With Anticipation*

...Yeah, I'm not sure if this would count as 'crack'. Or, well, if it did, it wouldn't be the humorous type.

Taylor can generally be a frustrating character, but I feel like you've ratcheted up that trait up to eleven. Going into details about what shards can do was a mistake, too, because that makes the reader (me) expect that there will be more.

And if I'm getting the convoluted backstory right, this has crossed into the usual depressing developments of Worm.

In the end, my impression is that you wanted to write an Entity!Taylor, but could only justify it by making it crack. A bad move, if that's the case, as it has kind of backfired - just write what you want.

Devoured this story in under 12 hours, looking forward to yet more chapters! Wonder what the Friendbringers will do with regards to the Birdcage - that of their worshipful acolyte Glaistig Uaine, the various malcontents of Teacher, Marquis, Lustrum, etc, the practically-innocents such as Canary? How will the 5 Friendbringers and their valiant hug-leader work with Dragon to end the Saint? Will Dragon be confirmed to have Triggered with a Shard, or just a digital version of a brand new Shard?

I missed this earlier and it's pretty funny too. Hope your muse for Ancient Legos and your other tales return.