nice 40K reference

Nice story. Hope you find time and inspiration to finish it sometime.

This is the biggest cliffhanger that got left out hanging to dry for eternity that I've ever seen. Congrats, haole, you topped it all. Fantastic though, I must regrettably admit, despite the spelling errors here and there.

Also, I don't know why but I have a feeling that the author is South-East Asian, possibly Chinese. No one else would say "shishi" for peeing lmao

This is stunningly good. I’m not a christian but I am enjoying this very different Harry and hid family. I like your O.C’s though I am worried about the foreshadowing for Libra! I hope that you are hale and hearty - and will at some point pick this back up, as I would love to know what’s next -oh, and that Libra dies at a ripe old age, giving David just enough time before he joins her!

The expression is “Worse (the comparative) came to worst (the superlative)”.

Ugh, this is unreadable. You know why so many people hate us Christians? Because of people like *you*, who just can't stop patting themselves on the shoulder about how good and faithful they are. This is pathetic.

This story would be improved by reducing the Jesus-wank. The man had things to say about people who preach on street corners to make themselves look more pious, in case you've forgotten.

"Oh thank God," I sighed, slumping in my seat. My virtue was intact.

lol, what a loser

Shit story

Okay I understand religion is important to the character, but is this a HP fic or an existential crisis from a man obviously over reliant on religion for maintaining his mental state? Now I understand the existence of God is important to him. But acting as if the world would end and if he found out it's all fake is insane to me. As an atheist, if I got proof God was real I'd just shrug and say "cool". Does he not realise you can't disprove God? The burden of proof isn't on wizards to disprove God, it's on religion to prove God exists, so what's there to worry about? It's not like facts have ever been a barrier. to entry for religion throughout history.

Shouldn't be a harry Potter fanfiction but a real life fanfiction with all the religious take...

Talking religious when you write a wiccan fanfiction ...

Nah bra, you cannot just leave this story there. That hurts my feelings to think I’m never going to have an end to this story.

Hope you are allright though. While this kind of story isn’t something I normally would consider my thing, I really enjoy how it has turned out so far.
So if you need the extra encoragement to continue the story, I’ll gladly give it!

Wha- NOOOOO! I need more! Please continue this! This is such a unique take on the HP mythos.

It's nice to know you're insert is a fucking retarded shit for brains in advance so
I can temper myself to your bs. Really telling harry his world is fictional when he's older 'hey kid every bad thing that has happened and will happen to you was written on the whims of a writer purely for entertainment'. Retard can try to dolly it but that's the nitty griity of it and you the cruel bitch of a writer want someone this fictional as they are. People call me a monster but you are fucked.

NOOO! Dont leave me on a cliffhanger like this! AAAA I need to know what happens next!
I love your worldbuilding, especially the emphasis on Hawaiian culture! I can't claim to know a lot about it, but it's fascinating to learn about it secondhand! Love the inclusion of different types of magic, and acknowledging that the Statute makes no sense if it was universally accepted.
I hope you're doing okay, and that 2020 didn't hit too badly.