|Reviews for Why Time Travel Should Be Illegal and Other Morals|
| Guest2 chapter 46 . 4/26/2020
This story was interesting to read and want to see more. Also review below me from the other Guest, you go fuck yourself. This is a story with a premise, if you don’t like the content then don’t bother to say more unless if it’s for true critique.
It’s also not that bad, it may be covering topics you might not normally want to read about but it’s honestly a lot better than having smut every chapter thinly veiled for plot without any prior indication it would be the case.
Author, I honestly recommend posting this to Spacebattles, Alternatehistory, or Sufficientvelocity if you seek better criticism of your writing and wish to improve. Review sections on here can only do so much and are highly opinionated.
| Guest chapter 9 . 3/17/2020
I am astounded. Typically I look at reviews to see what other people think before I dive into a long fic and saw a review for chapter 9. It said something similar to "Now I remember why this isn't one of my favorites" without anymore context. Thus, I decided to skim through chapter 9 to see why they decided it didn't need context. Speechless, is how I feel. Other reviewer, I totally agree, this needs no context. This is... wow. Bad. Horrifyingly awful, really. Yikes, glad I read reviews, I dodged a bullet.
To the author: maybe put a disclaimer that you'll have sociopolitical topics and religion in a fic? I hate nothing more than finding a fic with a awesome premise only to see the author shove their views on religion, politics, etc in your face. I hate it even more when the content has more views on those topics than actual plot and dialogue. What a joke, I read fanfiction for some mild entertainment and to pass some time. Not for some self-gratifying fuck to shove their opinions on religion down my throat. You should be ashamed of writing garbage of this caliber, or proud if the intentions were to write as awful as possible. With that all said, I have one last opinion. Go fuck yourself.
| gerocon2015 chapter 4 . 3/17/2020
"Relax, it's been like two months, there's no way she knows-"
You'd think a guy called MURPHY would know damn well not to tempt fate like that, really. But yeah, loving the story so far.
| Cerue Leanne Dawn chapter 46 . 2/17/2020
Interesting, it got me binge reading. Hope you update soon
| Viviene001 chapter 9 . 2/15/2020
Oh right, now I remember why this isn’t in my favorites list... sad, this isn’t for me. :c
| Viviene001 chapter 2 . 2/15/2020
TEstest favorites list
| Viviene001 chapter 1 . 2/15/2020
Ohhhhh I remember this lol
| SummerChildWinterFury chapter 45 . 1/14/2020
Wonderful story so far - thank you for writing/sharing it with us x
| kenodoxia chapter 39 . 12/22/2019
I would love to see an hp ff where the characters just getting really into muggle pop culture and trying to emuulate the characters using their magic. like the kids at hogwarts get inspired by muggle pop culture and trying to create them. just imagine space marines, jedis, siths, cowboys, various dnd characters, and gundam fans and martial arts nuts just going crazy in the magical world
| libraryrockerr chapter 13 . 12/12/2019
I'm glad Harry has a loving family. Thank you very much for writing!
| pepejohn chapter 8 . 12/2/2019
Hell, we got a ton of nutters in here. This is why you NEED to mark your fic as religious. This is just like that Mormon Lockhart fic which was ruined by the religious vitriol.
| pepejohn chapter 7 . 12/2/2019
What's with all this Jesus crap? Kinda killing the vibe here...
| xxxLeanniexxx chapter 46 . 11/11/2019
What chaos will they get up to now I wonder?
| CrystalAris chapter 5 . 10/26/2019
Like seriously how was this guy single?!
| CrystalAris chapter 3 . 10/26/2019
Oh my God I wanna marry this guy, is he available?