Reviews for Why Time Travel Should Be Illegal and Other Morals
Enigmaticrose4 chapter 2 . 12/1/2017
Yay! An update! I know this story idea is crazy stupid, but you write it so well, and with that bit of sarcasm in the tone, that it's just so much fun to read. It feels an awful lot like a loving parody of OC/Time Travel/Fix-It fics. Like Galaxy Quest to Star Trek.

Love it and can't wait for more!
Enigmaticrose4 chapter 1 . 11/29/2017
Damn. Found this fic on reddit. I usually steer clear of OC fics - least where they're the main character- but the idea sounded different. I'm so glad I took a look. Even if you never write another word in this tale - I see it's not marked complete - I will be glad I read it. Every word was wonderful and my imagination js spinning at the possibilities.
Toad King chapter 1 . 11/29/2017
Just finished the Redheaded Stepchild and made this my new addiction!

I need another chapter of this! This looks promising
KnowInsight chapter 1 . 11/29/2017
Well that's the best self insertion I've read. :D
LondonsWhereMyHeartIs chapter 1 . 11/28/2017
MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR WANT MOAR!

It's silly, but it's the right sort of silly!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/27/2017
This is wonderful and heartbreaking.
InquisitorCOC chapter 1 . 11/27/2017
Very good!

But why would he tell Ms Macnair about time travel? Too dangerous.

Also, don't buy Apple in 1986, not just one year after Steve Jobs got fired from the company. It was going to be disaster until 1997 in our time. Because of his very presence, the butterfly effect might cause Apple to completely go under. Better put everything into Microsoft.
lazypika chapter 1 . 11/27/2017
Dang, this is a really interesting take on the self Insert genre. I love the attention to detail, like Mr M dialing 911 instead of 999 at first. Looking forward to the next chapter!
xxxLeanniexxx chapter 1 . 11/27/2017
Fascinating story idea!
Grin like the Cheshire Cat chapter 1 . 11/27/2017
More plz
Dracarot chapter 1 . 11/26/2017
Our point of view character is definitely going big with this, intervening in Potterverse, getting a fortune via stocks and MTG (just better not go to far in that otherwise it'll completely miss the point of their value and rarity), and trying to prevent 9/11 and who knows what else Muggle side. Points for ambition I guess but be careful with the last, when you start messing with geopolitics, nation states and non state actors, things can and will get tricky as the butterflies are let loose.

As for the elderly headmistress's insistence on looking into Olivia Davers, There's a million things she hasn't done but just you wait, just you wait.

What? I wasn't going to throw away my shot at a Hamilton reference! Just because our point of view character can't reference it for a little under three decades doesn't mean I won't. Okay, okay so she only barely meets the "bastard" requirement to be Hamilton and none of the others, but the status quo has been shaken by those in worse of positions.
RoverMaelstrom chapter 1 . 11/26/2017
OH MY GOSH. Yes. This is great. I really love this and am super excited for this story!
SeanHicks4 chapter 1 . 11/26/2017
Interesting start, seems a bit like a self insert, and I’m not usually to into them though.
Kray S427 chapter 1 . 11/26/2017
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
katmom chapter 1 . 11/26/2017
Wow! Great start. Funny and sad, too. Thanks for sharing.
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