Reviews for Once A Father
XMarisolX chapter 1 . 8/2/2004
I liked this story. I love the slice-of-life stories. Gabe is true to character. I like teh way he tries to deflect Chloe, and then the pleasan surprise of her worrying about HIM. Nice.
Silence-endlessecho chapter 1 . 4/1/2003
I really enjoyed that. I agree - a lot of underlying concepts that carry into Chloe's life now. It's nice to see her family in action and a little bit more of Chloe's background. I really enjoyed it!
LastScorpion chapter 1 . 3/18/2003
That was so cute and sweet! Your Chloe seems to talk and think like Chloe would've when she was little. I really like the way she worries about Gabe, and the family tradition of marital meltdown they have going on there (which would help explain that pre-emptive "just-friending" thing she does.)