Thanks for the chapters.

Shirous ideals we to save everyone the problem with that ideal is that he wants to save everyone but doesnt care about himself th ats why archer becomes archer by the end of UBW he changes his ideals a bit he wants to save everyone but also himself.

He cant copy things perfectly unless he actually studies a weapon or is in a similar situation as Avalon(since its been inside for years he can copy it perfectly) with a just a glace the weapons will be deranked by 1

What happened with Shirou’s charcter? This is nothing like him. He would never even think of genocide like this for that reason.

Why didnt you just let him use his actual bow?

An "old" fallen angel? I'm pretty sure Raynare was a relatively young second generation fallen angel...? And she gave Shirou "I am the Bone of my Sword" Emiya a workout? How? Did you just nerf him into oblivion or something?

Please tell me that *everything* in DxD isn't going to steamroll him, like the next thing you know [Redacted!] *Freed* is going to give him the fight for his life at the power level that I think you are capping him at.

Newsflash - Nerfing the MC of your fic isn't a good idea, it's a *horrible* idea, if you wanted an MC to start off weak and grow into power then please, never write using an already existing MC. Just create an OC, it'd piss a *lot* less people off.

And Remember, Never give your OC/MC a power you want them to have, only to then take it away for reasons like "It's *too* OP!". Don't power up a character in the first place if you we're just going to nerf them later.

An another note - Don't buff the antagonist simply for the reason of making sure they give the OC/MC a non-steamroll fight. (Example: Harry Potter becomes idk, a demigod, so Voldemort simply *has* to randomly become the Vessel of Kronos Tee-Hee~)

You do know that Shirou would never tell them about being a dimension traveler or even give a single hint especially after he's become older and lived with rin, after all this kind of thing would get him a sealing designation in his world

wtf with the character emotions man, on situation is serious the it flip so fast that the emotion of the charter turn into, mellow like wtf

shirou I know that truma is hard to forget but, through out your life you experience I thought your been hardened by the experiences that you been through and not bitch about, and your older now like wtf.

in what country does a 19 year old still go to schooll?

It was honestly a great read, you put together a good world and you synchronized it with fate and it is hopeless that you do not continue after making a tremendous scandal with the other deities and I honestly expected a reaction from Scáthach, honestly I don't know if it exists in dxd but I'm sure you would a good job.

A non stop read for me, certainly a great story that kept me hooked from the start. Not sure if this is being updated but I would love to read more

welp... here we go again... another long wait... well, time to meditate, as I ponder these new developments into Shirous' existence...

love the story, and seeing it hasnt been updated since 2018 is just sad... I'm only chapter 8 of 13, but this story is so good I want to see it continue... even if someone adopts it, I would follow it merely to continue such a well written, and in depth story.

Hope you come-back to finish thus story I want to see Shirou meeting the DxD descendants Pendragon.