Good story, though by this point it feels like Shirou is being forced into betraying his own feelings by external influences.

I have a feeling this exposition was more for the readers, but that felt real ooc. Like hell shiro would just up and explain the holy grail war and all that when he could just say he's been in a few too many wars. Or even just have that ending part about being a mercenary. It makes it worse considering he did his best to withhold information during the questioning. overall still an interesting story so far.

one of the best stories I've read in a while. really wish you'd continue it but anyway, thanks got this masterpiece.

Peerage is dumb. There are half a dozen better ways.

Also, the “never a war that the part that started it, won” is patently bollocks.

Don't know if you still live...COVID and all that, but thank you for making this odd story, even if it's incomplete/discontinued.

Dear author, you then made Serafall stronger than the Grail, then Hercules from the faction of heroes turned into a jester. The faction of heroes is a good force for the DxD universe, and Cao Cao may well emerge victorious from the battle with Mau. They turned out to be too comical for you. Will you decide if Shiro is OP or not?

I'm from the fourth chapter. I was very amused by the moment with "her strength exceeded everything I saw." Well, unfortunately for fans, the DxD universe sucks off Fate. Just for the sake of understanding, if the author only mentioned the caster, it would be pure truth. But the author dared to compare the minor character-joke with the GRAIL. With a magical device capable of truly fulfilling ANY desire. An artifact that alone can send the entire DxD universe to the tentacles of Slaanesh.

I really enjoyed this story. I'm sad that this is probably dead but everything that already exists is already Preety good on its own.

to Lord Kobakiel - mistake.

Very well, Shrirou. - mistake

could you make any statements about the status of your story,?

Estaba muy buena la historia lastima que no siga aún así estaré esperando alguna actualización

I honestly tloved this story quite a bit, but am sad no updates in years

Love the deeper character development and slow burn relationship changes

Amazing and touching chapters and characters development and can’t wait for the next chapter update

Aaaand... done.
Again.
I actually struggled to find this one, since it’s surprisingly not on the first few pages of top Fate-DxD fics.
Shame it’s dead.