Reviews for No Such Thing as Retirement (Adopted)
WoNdEr GrAy chapter 8 . 11/12/2020
who is her dad here ? i so wanna knowww UPDATE
LiliLoveNutella chapter 8 . 10/26/2020
Please update
KittyLover2619 chapter 8 . 7/4/2020
Please update this story!
yarnfan4life chapter 8 . 6/27/2020
love it please write more
AwesomeFangirlOtaku01 chapter 4 . 11/9/2019
OMG her dad is Gabriel!?
Qorianth Grindelwald chapter 8 . 10/4/2019
Oh? Niw I really want to hear this one! Which time was this? Was it the time the he messed up a dinner party or was it the time he tried to flirt with her? Was it the time he hexed Severus when she was still friends with him?
musicluver246 chapter 8 . 9/14/2019
Great story so far.
Guest chapter 8 . 12/12/2018
Please update, it's brilliant
Guest chapter 8 . 9/2/2018
love
DaSalvatore chapter 8 . 8/9/2018
This story had some potential (both the original and this) but it fell into two extremely annoy flaws.

1 - The overly complicated avoidance of not saying who Harry's father is. Avoidance of saying who a mystery character is for a chapter or two is one thing but, unless the story involves a spy/double-agent/assassin, stretching the mystery out for 8 chapters is an attempt at being clever and can seriously turn a reader off.

2 - This story is almost nothing more than canon episodes rewritten line by line with random parts of Harry through in. She might be changing /how/ a case is finished, but she's ultimately not impacting their lives at all. As it stands, there only key scenes are the Harry and her father conversations.

If a writer isn't going to have HP/ an MC impact how their canon crossover world happens, then the story itself must focus on the MC outside of the crossover events. If Harry isn't involved in the Winchesters' lives beyond being written into random episodes then show the reader what her life is like away from them. Who her father is, what her history is, how she's looking after Teddy. Without that, it's written out dialogue from Supernatural and some fluff.
LuvMyBoys chapter 8 . 7/31/2018
Loved this story, please update when you can
Bisque-Ware chapter 8 . 7/31/2018
I would love to see this continue!
Wika0304 chapter 8 . 7/24/2018
please update
starrat chapter 8 . 5/18/2018
I loved it looking forward to the next chapter
Romantific chapter 8 . 4/25/2018
I love this story and can’t wait for the next chapter. I read the original and loved it as well.
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