Dios te bendiga Jesús te amo ️

Dios te bendiga Jesús te amo ️ te amo

This chapter give me a chill, this is so well written. Well done!

Srry but this chapter is flawed. Firstly the lessons do not work here. Mangus was right and he won the moment he has to activate those wards. Something he wouldn't be able to do in a real fight.

On top of that the dual wasn't told at the start what limits they were fighting.
On top of that mangus was increasing his physical ability alone with his warp craft. It isn't really different than the others. It crossed the line when he turned the sword rubber . The spar should have ended there.

I have enjoyed what i have read of this fanfic so far and I hope that you are able to continue it.

Awesome!

Thanks so much for this guide it gives so much mental context specially for battles to come

I know you will probably not see this but about your fifth point. We know there is at least one more chaos god that could be born and that is the dark king which most probably is a dark twisted version of the emperor. Before his duel with Horus he felt the magnitude of the power Horus had consumed and tapped into and absorbed a great deal of warp energy and felt himself changing and the people felt it and some of his custodes got burned and then reanimated from the power but he didnt notice the damage and thought he could control it but he could not since the dark king is the chaos god of Ruin and destruction and would have destroyed the galaxy. That was until Ollanus Pius spoke some sense into him and he realized the damage he had been doing and stopped so there is at least one more chaos god that can be born.

Awsome action and great story filled with just enough darkness and hope to build upon the previous chapters trully awsome work

I love how it keeps the essence of the original setting with that energy and hope and positivity that moves this story. Truly and waseome story

Was really enjoying the story but this name change killed it for me honestly. Not only is it completely unnecessary but you also went against the whole “unified family” thing by giving them different last names.

If anything, it would have just made more sense to keep their orignal first names and then having Anathema as the last name they all shared.

Anyways, story was enjoyable up to this point but it really was a total mood killer

Has anyone found the continuation

"I do not see fellow strugglers against the primordial annihilator when you stand before me. I see the vermin that drowned the galaxy in death by gnawing through a dyke. Vermin that have the gall to approach those rebuilding and asking for a place in our world."

Coldest motherfucking line by Magnus, holy shit.

the first half of this chapter is missing spaces between the paragraphs. It genuinely looking like blocks of texts

So the whole “stick a nearly dead Astartes into a dreadnought” thing doesn’t exist in this AU?