Reviews for Imperium Ascendant
Guest chapter 12 . 2/27/2018
Nice meyn, more meyn.
masandland chapter 1 . 2/28/2018
Amazing tail on leas keep it up
Muad'zin chapter 12 . 2/28/2018
It would make for more boring story telling, but it would probably have been less costly to give the Chaos Gods their four primarchs. After all, they may no longer be able to throw in the same monkey wrench as before, they could easily throw in a different one. And when you call them in to negotiate you at least have to offer them something, other then fuck off.

Come to think of it, it would make for very interesting story telling, which four to select, how will they develop, how will the other 17 react to their missing brothers. And it would be 17 because after all there were 21 primarchs. Alpharius AND Omegon, remember?
davycrockett100 chapter 12 . 2/27/2018
awesome
lmamc chapter 12 . 2/27/2018
Great chapter, what do the chaos gods mean that the emperor was not the first of his kind? You are going to have to answer that question. Can't wait to read more, hope you update soon.
SamuelthegreatOO chapter 12 . 2/27/2018
Great job! I hope that the next chapter begins soon!
Danny79 chapter 12 . 2/27/2018
No, the Emperor are not divine. It is just narrow minded humans who keept pushing that label on him just because he wore golden armor and had a flaming sword... Dam first dark age mentality mooks.

And the four screwups do not have a monopoly on use of the warp. Infact they are beings of the warp having been spawned/created by it themself.

Having them demanding payment of any form for Emps having used his own warp powers to aid in the creation of the primarchs is like all the sudden having fishes demanding payment for us using water to cook, drink or other things. Ludicrous beond belif.
edboy4926 chapter 12 . 2/27/2018
Awesome chapter
BrotherCaptainSheperd chapter 12 . 2/27/2018
One word... Epic
Ronmr chapter 12 . 2/27/2018
Awesome. I wonder how will you make the primarchs now. Since they will not be carried through the warp and won't be mutated by it. (Or in Ferruses case fight a giant living metal monster and gain living metal arms.)
The Reaper of Valhalla chapter 12 . 2/26/2018
Damn, i wish these come out quicker. They’re so damn good. Outside of that nothing can be said about the story. In a negative way. All of this story has been universe building so far and its been Great to read.
lmamc chapter 11 . 2/26/2018
This story is great, I can't to read more.
Danny79 chapter 11 . 2/23/2018
So it is bring the kids to work day. Well if they are to stay out of Chaos hands they need to know what to keept ther eyes for.

A equally big problem is to make sure that the future legions wont be infiltrated by chaos agents. A problem that will happen with legions that have tens of thousands of members. other issues with many of the legions are allso ther disdain for mortals, who they are realy supposed to protect. Not a good mix there.

Ther warrior mentality allso caused a lot of problems, both for others and for themself. Charging well defended postions without bothering to wait for the imperial armys artillery to have time to setup and soften up the defences were a thing among most of the legions. Taking higher losses just because BS honor and glory, both concepts that have no place on a battlefield. The warrior mentality allso caused needless competition or rivalty between the varius legions. (Witch allso were influenced by how ther legions primarchs liked eatchother.)

Emps shuld realy have the eventual space marines to be trained as pragmatic elite soldiers instead of instilling that bothersome warrior BS into ther minds.
SciFiFan96 chapter 11 . 2/19/2018
So good! Excited for the next installment.
sonic chapter 11 . 2/18/2018
I liked the chapter!
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