Reviews for The Devil's Own
Lahmikhara chapter 22 . 12/3/2022
I"m really enjoying this story so far. At first I wondered if it would do the previous story written by Silently justice. And I can honestly say it does. I look forward to when this comes off of hiatus
KattzKitten chapter 2 . 11/11/2022
Interesting story!
An Outsider chapter 21 . 7/21/2022
Let the Gate open!
Takadoshi Uzumaki chapter 22 . 12/25/2021
aww... was this dropped?
Takadoshi Uzumaki chapter 12 . 12/24/2021
I CAN completely eliminate my emotions...I just flip the switch in my head and BOOM... don't you love childhood trauma? (っっ
Caver Floyd chapter 22 . 9/16/2021
Damn. Silently stopped writing this because it made them depressed to get in the head of such a lonely character, and then you continue where they left off and get Sirius killed. I wasn’t expecting that. It’s kind of made me sad now too. Harry really can’t catch a break. Good story though, and it is well written enough that the change of authors isn’t really noticeable. I hope you continue with year 4.
daled73 chapter 5 . 6/4/2021
It appears the last update was 2018. Now 2021. If I may advise you, quit trying to force the story where you think it needs to go. Just "tell the story" as if to an intelligent child, and your subconscious will fill in what needs to be. And you may get a far different ending from what you planned or expected.
Take any unused notes as "plot points" to include, and your subconscious will weave them in where they fit.
Adriaan De Belge chapter 2 . 4/28/2021
the transition from Deal with the Devil to The Devil's Own is fantastically well done!

My compliments, I'll keep reading!

Wb, Adriaan
jeremiah.elliott.jr chapter 22 . 2/18/2021
Hi there! I know it’s been some time since you’ve updated and I hope there are updates in the works. If not, no worries. Life happens. I’d like you to know I enjoyed what you have written so far and hope to eventually see more.
Spriggan chapter 22 . 11/12/2020
Hope you are able to finish this story. I would love to read more.
ursaMinorInTheSky chapter 21 . 7/14/2020
That M. Night shamallama tier twist where it seems like you've built up a love triangle when in fact 100% of Harry's friends are gayer than dumbledore and Harry's about to achieve a full circle character arc of being alone in a pretend family to being a beard in a pretend relationship. Confused why, if Serious had to die, it couldn't have been something completely unnavoidable instead of "plan A we bring this unstable escapee into a nest of Aurors and dementors beside these VIPs and the source of his phsychosis/obsession and see what happens". Loved how you brought in fae and a lot of it was quite humorous.
wolfzmasterz chapter 22 . 7/9/2020
Wow, I was a little worried when I saw this story had been changed to a different author for the third year... but you have done an amazing job! I really like this story and where it looks to be heading. I can not wait to see what happens in the near future. You are Ana amazing writer and I look forward to reading more of your writings.
CheddarTrek chapter 22 . 4/29/2020
Fun times. Thanks for writing! I look forward to year 4.
CheddarTrek chapter 8 . 4/28/2020
I'm enjoying this so far (both the previous story and this one), but there's one thing that I feel got glossed over a bit.

Sally-Anne's... situation? Her parents still think she's dead, right? It seems like the Obliviator who partially bound her and did all of that got a slap on the wrist and now she's back in school and neither she nor Harry seems to be pursuing the issue of her parents or Hermione or trying to make a change there.

I'm not saying I want to see them doing that just... it seems like that entire aspect got glossed over. I'd have expected them to at least be more frustrated they can't do more or them planning to work on it later, etc.

Anyway, well done continuing this!
bemorningstar chapter 22 . 4/17/2020
No pressure, but is the story abandoned or will their be more?
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