Reviews for The Devil's Own |
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Mingyu chapter 6 . 1/1/2018 As someone who just read through Silently Watches fic to get to here, thank you very much for continuing this (even if the sentiment is a bit late). I loved the idea of Lash being put in Harry's head, loved their interactions and relationship development, and I'm really impressed with how well you followed through on that continuing the story! As for this chapter itself, I most liked the Hippogriff scene, although I do feel like Harry should have been asking where this healing magic was back in the first part. Granted, the wound was relatively minor compared to a troll beating and everything done to him. Anyway, thanks for the chapter and happy New Year! |
The Quiet Psychotic chapter 2 . 1/1/2018 really enjoying this so far, just finished reading the preceding stories and went straight to it flowed nicely. but the eye thing, while true to dresden, contradicts a few bits of the previous stuff doesn't it. still cool either way, and if so an easy retcon, if not my bad. either way, like it. TQS |
Um the Muse chapter 6 . 12/30/2017 I seem to have misplaced my log-in info, but I wanted to let you know that I'm interested in where you take Silently Watches' story. It looks good so far. |
ShadowFyre666 chapter 6 . 12/30/2017 So happy you adopted this fic, I'm excited to see what direction you take it! |
Perspicacity chapter 6 . 12/30/2017 Glad to see you picked this up. It's an engaging tale and I look forward to where you go with it. |
Impstar chapter 6 . 12/29/2017 I feel bad for Sally. I hope we see more of how she's doing and if she's able to still use wand magic. Out of everyone here, she's probably been the most screwed over by life. |
Anon Of The Sea chapter 6 . 12/29/2017 Not a bad continuation, dude. Not bad at all |
captainwonderbuns chapter 6 . 12/28/2017 I like it. A worthy continuation. The authors notes on the original indicated that she was having an issue with Harry finding connections to other students and you seem to have fixed that nicely. Tracy was out of left field but a welcome addition. And of course the ever awesome Luna. I wonder if she will be able to sense Lash? Other authors often make out to be some flavor of seer. |
WillItWork chapter 6 . 12/28/2017 Another redirect from Silently Watches. I'm guessing you have a lot of knowledge about Wales, then? Either way, I'm glad to see Harry and Lash making it up to one another, and alternate paths of magic getting a chance. Thanks for sharing! |
Chaos Greymistchild chapter 6 . 12/28/2017 You know what this chapter made me see? Lash and Harry geeking all over those healing books. And I mean all over. I bet they'll have entire shelves full of notebooks about healing, what with how their lives have been going so far. |
syed chapter 6 . 12/27/2017 I am hoping lash helps to augement the animagus process. That would be very cool. It could be as simple as speeding up the process, or it could extend to multiple form. A flight form, a stealth/spying for a do something capable of doing some damage. A speedy one, a form suited to travel could be very useful. It would be epic if he could make foci his forms could use. Magical damage and dark magic injuries are likely far more difficult to heal and tricky. I wonder if after exposure to some of the more advanced healing books, lash could create way to at least better manage and control the werewolf curse. I could totally see healing magics being able to damage a dementor. In the books, lash was teaching Dresden the guitar. So she could encourage Harry to develop some bardic skills. Harry seems to like animals, so even though he does not really get involved, I could see him supporting Hagrid. I bet Luna as a friend leads to all kinds of Estoic lore. |
notYacob chapter 1 . 12/27/2017 I'm glad this story is being continued and I like what you've written so far. I've also taken a look at some of your other stories and found those enjoyable too. I look forward to reading more of your work. |
AlexDnD chapter 6 . 12/27/2017 Yay another chapter! Keep going this is a great story. |
Alatoic01 chapter 6 . 12/27/2017 Good chapter, nice to see what Dumbledore is thinking and how close to know he is. Will be interesting to see that development. So Malfoy will try the same old scheme to get the hipoggriff killed? I really hope Harry can stop it. Will be interesting to see what can Harry learn of healing, quite different a what Lash can know, lets see what can be adapted and learned. REALLY hoping to read more soon. |
Kairan1979 chapter 6 . 12/27/2017 Thanks for the chapter. Glad to see Harry introduced to Luna Lovegood. She is a wonderful character. Looks like Malfoy was hurt worse than he was in canon. |