I'm glad to see this continue and your writing seems just as good. Regarding this chapter specifically it's really nice to see the threats at Hogwarts treated with appropriate respect.

Really glad to know this story is continuing. Your writing is quite good and I hope you can continue soon.

I'm very glad to see this story continued :)

Really liking what there is so far.

I enjoyed your first chapter and will look forward to many more. Thank you for continuing this great story.

Most entertaining, thank you for taking up this monumental task.
May the muse be with you.

good to see the story adopted
the story is good so far, im happy with it
keep working

Glad to see you adopted the story.
Looking forward to see more.

The Deal with Devil is good and I'm happy someone continue it, however I personally think that you make other capable to see Lash is unwise

Its major turn off, remember Lash is placed in there by higher being, one that would make Voldy like ant in comparison, and the thought of someone can see her accidentally...

One of big point in the Deal with Devil is that Lash private converse with Harry and you just took it away

I'm sorry but you lost me in there, I don't know about the other but I think that also one of reason why this story have less than hundred fav and fol despite it already a month

Well, good luck with your story anyway, perhaps in future I might look at it again

I'm glad that this story is being continued. Nice job so far.

The only thing I would suggest is not to have very long paragraphs (as in 5 sentences maximum), and break it up to allow for more spacing.

Nice to see this series get adopted! :)

Interesting.

nice to see this story being continued again!

I can see lash teaching Harry the patronus so much sooner.

If this is part of the world underneath, I wonder if there are any dwarf aspect to it.

I'm liking the inclusion of Tracey, having a friend in the same house ought to go a long way towards helping his socializing skills. I'm looking forward to seeing how he interacts with someone a bit more snarky than his Hufflepuff friends.

Also... Yay! Lash finally gets to pull off the whole "Guardian Angel" schtick. :P I wonder if she'll find that humorous in retrospect?

Okay, a couple things confused me here, and only one of them I suspect is due to being a guy... Who is this Amy? I'm guessing someone of note for the coming story plots? And I'm scratching my head over Aimée. Did she suddenly become a blood purest regarding having a relationship with Harry? Also... is it just a coincidence that the two girls names are practically the same?

Eh, oh well. For the rest of the chapter I was pretty interested in what Harry plans to use the core for, I'm suspecting its to help create a vessel for Lash. And just the thought of what Harry's new professor will think of his "History Revised" paper just put a smirk on my face.