Reviews for The Walls Still Stand
powerrangerzrock chapter 1 . 11/4/2013
Very good story. It was well written and brought a tear to my eye. Great job
Ghostwriter chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
Very interesting. Catch ya on the flip side.
germankitty aka Dagmar Buse chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
Very interesting, and a wonderful take on a minor character who often just seems to serve as comic relief. Good job!

However, may I suggest you invest in a thesaurus or good dictionary? Your choice of words is on occasion rather repetitive, which mars an otherwise very well-written fic. (I'm thinking especially of the third paragraph - you used "building" six times in just four lines! Try edifice, structure, halls, whatever ... please? There are other instances, but that's the most obvious.)
Psycho Tangerine chapter 1 . 6/29/2003
Very nice story. I like it when focus is put on a background character.
livie chapter 1 . 3/19/2003
Too good for words. Wonderful.
SilverRider chapter 1 . 3/19/2003
Ok, you left me speachless!

Man, this one good, very good, Try Mrs AppleBee!

*grabs a tissue* This one with full one emtions! Good Job!
cmar chapter 1 . 3/19/2003
Different, and very nicely done. I always like to see something fleshing out a minor character like this.
Ibonekoen chapter 1 . 3/19/2003
*blinks away tears* Very nice, very moving, excellent show of emotion. :-D
cobalt-blue chapter 1 . 3/19/2003
As a fan and a teacher, all I can say is:


Higuchimon chapter 1 . 3/19/2003
A very nice little read. I always enjoy seeing something from the perspective of some of the lesser written about, and you don't get much more lesser written about than the principal! The only minor flaw I can point out is that T.J.'s last name is Johnson and Carlos' is Vallertes. :) Other than that, quite good.