Lovw this story.

Fate beeds a punch in the face

Welp this is what they get for being passive

Is Mrs. Potter going to get anything done as head of DMLE? I know this is long written but…damng

Is Mrs. Potter going to get anything done as head of DMLE? I know this is long written but…damng

I…wandless magic isnt tracked. You said as much a few times. Why the hell do these fights get that close? She should not have been caught for that long.

I thought earlier in the book you said she could flash?

I don't see why bright and mar weren't stunned or hexed or punched or challenged to a honour duel

great story really well done

I feel jasmine slapping or punching him would of been best solution.

Yeah it honestly pisses me off when JK has families NOT TEACH THEIR KIDS

I thought her caretaker was DMLE. WHY THE HELL IS JASMINE TELLING HER TO DO HER DAMN JOB? Its well written, but a SERIOUS plot hole that needs worked out. Did dumbles make her more stupid over time with compulsions or something?

The best way to deal woth chaos theory time travel is instead of being a butterfly, you just be a nuclear bomb. Slam as much future knowledge through the ether at one time and sink as many enemies as possible at once, then be prepared to dance like never before through the chaos. Otherwise you lose ALL your future knowledge through the subtle changes you made. Also hope she gets bella as HERS instead of letting her mary the leatranges.

Just announcing that tom riddle is the dark lord would help. Let it be known he is halfblood

Uh shes stupid if she doesnt go to her new caretaker and have her get the DOM involved. If you didnt use something equally as obvious and just let the drama continue then it was done solely FOR the drama. Which would be sad seeing how very well this is being written.

Shes lived that long, she should be a VERY deadly combatant. Also animagus trained in her boredom too. Hope this is the case otherwise it will be a waste of that many lives