Reviews for No Longer Alone |
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Pointer3109 chapter 26 . 10/29 "crawling across the boundary with his head perceiving a different up than his stomach made Harry throw up the moment he was out of the enchantment" At this point Harry is basically an acrobatic rated pilot. They don't really do vertigo. Good for the story, though. Enjoyed it. |
Pointer3109 chapter 24 . 10/29 "She was kept alive with a face on the back of her head?"..."Whatever for?" Oddly enough, Harry might have the best answer to that. :) |
Pointer3109 chapter 22 . 10/29 I would bet that a lot of the banned spells are more about torture than maiming or killi9ng. That said, a number are bound to be useful in a real fight. Enjoyed it. |
Pointer3109 chapter 19 . 10/28 "You expect her step-father to welcome you while greasing a shotgun like in a bad movie?" Had one do that. In his underwear. |
Pointer3109 chapter 17 . 10/27 My kid would never, ever go to that school. |
Pointer3109 chapter 14 . 10/27 1: "Harry had shown no signs of bad treatment, but those things weren't always obvious." This goes with 2 2:Wiz bangers are so incompetent they can't tell whether someone's bound by a contract or not. Dumbles is a more than average competent wiz banger and still can't tell whether a kid is abused when he's half starved, malnutrition, and beaten. |
rducharme232 chapter 14 . 10/16 this seems like a high school story with out any magic. so far he has an iq of a 5 year old and you should remove magic all together . |
Lawhai chapter 7 . 10/10 I'm all for Sirius and Narcissa boinking all the way up to her wedding. |
Lawhai chapter 5 . 10/10 The MiG-17 is one hell of a hideous plane. |
not a fan chapter 18 . 8/1 At least Harry finally decides to do something and doesn't act like the pathetic guy he is. |
not a fan chapter 17 . 8/1 and the beginning of this chapter proves me right, this harry is pathetic just like the author I'm glad Digory is dead, the only good thing you've done in this story (I don't hate him like other characters, but since he hasn't defended Harry, he doesn't deserve compassion) |
not a fan chapter 16 . 8/1 I think this Harry is much more pathetic than the canon Harry, I hate when shitty authors make Harry not defend himself against insults or curses, I find it pathetic, both the Harry they describe and the authors. (you included) |
not a fan chapter 10 . 7/31 so dumbles is even more useless than normal? perfect |
not a fan chapter 9 . 7/31 responding to WolfgangNH's Chapter 1 review. February 27: People who complain about stories being abandoned do so with reason, especially when they publish 500 stories and 499 have been abandoned. If you don't like the truth, don't read the comments to defend an author who abandons stories. to piles review of the chapter: if we have to base it on the original story, the glasses were bought at a charity event (I don't know if it is canon or fanon...) therefore they should no longer suit him, saying that the glasses They were still going well after years... pathetic The fact that enchanted glasses are prohibited is even more stupid when everything seems to be enchanted in one way or another (color-changing ink, self-inking pens... among many other things) and it's better not to comment on your author's note about horcruxes... at least a clue as to what the scar was should have been found, maybe more than a single clue. |
not a fan chapter 7 . 7/31 So an old and rich house has no money? what stupidity, I understand why this is abandoned |