Reviews for Harry Potter and the return to the First life
tofutofutofu chapter 9 . 2/3
YOURE WORSE THAN HARRY TO SNAPE AAAAA TEASING US WITH A CHAPTERim obsessed with all your stories i wish you come back and update with a new chapter!
SatanSan53 chapter 2 . 12/9/2023
"These memories are from my first life in general, and they don't focus on a specific situation or year, but it's mostly to get you used to the way magic is handled here and the customs of this community specifically"

What's the fun in this? The whole point of such fanfics is that characters, after moving, start poking around like blind kittens and doing all sorts of shit, to which the locals react amusingly. You just went and spoiled it all. For what?
killadomain chapter 1 . 7/23/2023
Master of beta males. Why do you even bother calling him the master oof death of you're just gonna turn him into a bitch
Guest chapter 8 . 1/30/2023
ffs this is even worse fucking Snape tried to cast a curse at aura, in his face, but it was her fault and needed to say sorry, and now he's bending over for Snape taking unbreakable vows talking about home land and shit, is he a scared 14 year old the needs theses people to have a positive view of him so they can tell him he's a good boy. Was going to read the others you wrote but god if this is you're harry I don't think I could stand it. Maybe next he will make npcs go and help death eater children reform and go to the light and never say a bad word again.
Guest chapter 7 . 1/30/2023
So this harry potter is a beta male, has to be so soft with everyone.
Making unbreakable vow instead of just telling the old goat fucker how it is, tells the npcs they have to take shit of everyone and they are not allowed to fight. God such a fucking pussy, you don't have to be a murder hobo just at least stand up for your self.
GreedElff chapter 9 . 1/22/2023
We need more chapterz! Pleaze!
OmegaUltima chapter 9 . 6/28/2022
Alas, it would seem that the NPCs perished midway through their journey through the cabinet. We shall sadly never get to see them meet Young Harry.
97531 chapter 8 . 5/26/2022
The request was to kill all the Death Eaters. That includes Snape. No reason to walk on eggshells around him.
97531 chapter 1 . 5/25/2022
Nice to see Harry wasn't summoned by Dumbledore and his Order.
aalbright425 chapter 9 . 10/13/2021
Thank you for the chapter, looking forward to the next one!
Sifo-Dyas chapter 2 . 8/12/2021
The writing is mediocre at best.
Guest chapter 8 . 6/17/2021
Snape is an irredeemable bastard, no excuses for his behaviour against harry. You are a serious insult towards this community
BigRig2.0 chapter 7 . 6/14/2021
Trash fic
binyhun chapter 9 . 4/18/2021
Daamn i really am hyped to see the npcs in hogwarts wreaking havoc, so sad it was dropped. Thanks for the read, it was quite enjoyable even if unfinished, just as the other work. Appreciate your hard work!
Aris Krem chapter 9 . 1/21/2021
I await your update... please
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