Reviews for When She Flies
Mavynn chapter 1 . 1/13
For now she was a winner... saddest line I have read all day. I really like the way you explore Cho's feelings here. her sense of bewilderment and betrayal that everyone just seems to have gone on like Cedric never existed as a real person. It is a lovely tribute to a very short love story.
empyreale chapter 1 . 1/13
This is really good! I do love Cho Chang fics, mostly because canonically, I feel as though she was underrepresented and her character was not as fleshed out as I would have liked. This was lovely in adding more depth to her. As for critiques, though it is minor, I'd suggest maybe adding a bit more detail. There are some sections in which you start to really explain her feelings, but those are short. I'd say keep going with that! There's so much potential :). I did like the imagery of the Quidditch pitch a lot as well, I could practically see the robes and feel the Snitch! Keep it up! I look forward to reading more!
yellow 14 chapter 1 . 12/8/2017
Short and touching. Keep writing