|Reviews for The Rise and Fall of Dante|
| Queerquail chapter 9 . 8/2/2006
I'm making a wild guess, but this is what I think at the moment: Dante is actually Trin's dad! O_o Then we can have a whole lot of angsty father-daughter relationships. Please update so I can find out :). Anyways, great interpretation of her earlier life, well written and exciting.
| Trialia chapter 9 . 1/7/2004
This is a great fic so far, but why have you left it so long to update? New chapter PLEASE!
| Zion Angel chapter 9 . 8/6/2003
I first read this story a while back, but I didn't review until now... I do that. Anyway, I figured I'd get around to it for a couple of reasons.
Number 1: You hate us don't you? You want to see us suffer. *grumbles* She's got a good story, good style, and yet she's being EVIL and not UPDATING and making us wait for THREE MONTHS! (Almost.) Mean... person...
*surpresses anger and calms down*
Number 2: I'm writing a little fic of my own, and yours gave me one or two tiny little itsy-bitsy ideas. So I just wanted to go ahead and say thank you. :)
Number 3: I love it, but, like I said...
| OriginalImitation chapter 9 . 6/7/2003
Brilliant story, are you going to write any more? Please do...
| Orestes1 chapter 9 . 6/7/2003
Finally found this story again (via your review of my own work) after reading it a few weeks ago but forgetting to take down the title. The current chapter is more of the same, high quality work. Your style is clear is well-written, and as mentioned already, your characters are refreshingly original. I also like the attention to you've paid to detail in regards to Trinity's hacking and the Kansas DB etc. This is a great fic, don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter!
Oh, and incidently, Catherine seems like a perfect name for Trinity. I can't say why, but it just seems to 'fit'. Nice choice.
| Hawk chapter 9 . 5/18/2003
I love your story. It is very well developed and well written. Please write more! I can't wait to see what happens next. The detail is great and I like the character development. Thanks for writing a good story.
| jellyqbellyq to lazy to sign in D chapter 9 . 5/17/2003
I love this so far...and can't wait to see where you take it. I love how you are developing her life and the other characters...:D
| Ryven chapter 9 . 5/17/2003
This is an excellently written story! I really like they way you have fleshed out Trinity's backstory. I think it is entirely in keeping with what we know if her from the movies; why she is the way she is.
Your caracters don't seem 'cookie cutter' to me. You've given glimpses into their personalities and roles without shoving excessive backstory or pages and pages of motivational thought at us. The ways things are written now, this seems much like the story of Trinity (with Dante -whom I have some suspicions about- and Morpheus playing fairly major supporting roles). So I'm not sure you need to flesh out the rest of the crew at a rate more than what you are currently doing.
I haven't read too much Matrix fanfic (Reloaded got me in the mood to read some) but this is a really unique idea you seem to be developing here. I really hope you continue this, because it's absolutely fantastic.
(And if you need someone to bounce Ideas off of, hey I'd be happy to help) _
| Draconious chapter 9 . 5/13/2003
Very vivid. I like it. I feel a real sense of "where" the characters are, which I like. I did notice a certain lack of area discriptions, making it a little hard to visualize locations sometime, but the characters are very real. Good work. Write some more okay?
| Amuanet chapter 8 . 5/9/2003
I love your fic and i'm happy you're still writing it.
| Chord chapter 8 . 5/4/2003
Oh shoot, must you end like that? Keeping us all in suspense for an explanation to what Dante meant by Trintiy dying a "third time..."...
This fic is getting betterandbetter, although I thought Trinity wouldn't be so calm about getting stabbed by Dion... she isn't one to take being hurt, for any reason, lightly...
Other than that one comment, I like this a lot. Please keep writing.
| Getuie chapter 7 . 4/23/2003
Er... Tastywheat? m interesting name...
This was very well written so for. I don't have any knowledge of hacking so I'm supremely thankful that only the basic terms are used (though I don't even know what 'common lisp' and 'scheme' is let alone the difference between the two.)
I think writing such a story should indeed be a challenge considering the small amount of info one has to go on by watching the movie, but you seem to pull it off beautifully. Well done.
Please update soon
| gypsy season chapter 7 . 4/23/2003
This fic is coming along great, I really like it. In response to your review-question in 'burn', Dion is my friends name, someone I haven't seen for a couple of years since she moved and I just thought of her and stuck her name in. Coincidence, eh? ;)
| Marithra chapter 7 . 4/16/2003
Cool! Write more please! I love it!
| Amuanet chapter 7 . 4/15/2003