Reviews for The Lost Weekend
milover chapter 1 . 9/8/2004
keep it going
Jewls13 chapter 1 . 3/20/2003
beautiful piece. really good.

Now, that being said, your summery is wrong. You say no spoilers but Jess not graduating from HS is a spoiler.

also, if you want reviews, set it so you can accept unsigned reviews.

I really do like this piece, although I think you made Lor a bit to hard. I do like how it ended. Its real. nice job for your first piece. I'd work on your Jess a bit..he was a bit too soft and your Lor was a bit to hard. but really good for your first fic. And I applaud you for not going the conventional way.