Reviews for The Devilish Messiah |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I would like to pick Kurotsuchi, I think she's a great pick because of the history the village has with minato, it could provide a great dynamic between the two. I also want Konan, TenTen, Karin, Samui, Yugao, and lastly Rin could be a fun addition if you somehow explain how she is alive, she can be like a pillar connecting naruto to minato or something. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this summary tells me exactly nothing |
![]() ![]() Volviste crack, esperando que continúes la historia |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm soooooo happy for this update... praise be the devilish messiah |
![]() ![]() ![]() wait, two years? isnt it too much? |
![]() ![]() ![]() And here i thought it was dead. Great job. Hope you'll keep updating |
![]() ![]() ![]() please add mei, anko, Tsunade and kurenai to the harem |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad to see you back and I'm interested in seeing what more you can do |
![]() ![]() ![]() naruto leaving his clan. same plot as sealkeeper: he who binds. also the same reason kushina left in sealkeeper: he who binds. the letters from konoha to kushina... same plot sealkeeper he who binds. very sad. to copy the actual plot and use them as they already happened in that other story. did you just copy word for word? |
![]() ![]() ![]() FanFiction Content Guidelines: Version: 11-20-2008 The chapter system is not to be used as placeholder for non-story content such as author notes. You can add short author notes to the beginning or at the end of stories but never as individual chapters. to summarize: SHORT AN beginning OR end of chapter. meaning you can only have 1 SHORT AN. NO AN in the middle of chapter. haven't reported but you should know the rules. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad to see you back! And even if it was a short chapter, I enjoyed it. Hope you are back once more for the upcoming future, and hope you have an enjoyable Holiday! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Been a while. Curious to see how things are as they go forward. Also look forward to seeing how the pairing has changed in the time you’ve been gone. Noticed the obvious lack of poll at the end of the chapter. |
![]() ![]() Formatting for chapter 8 is mucked up |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally, an update since a long time. |
![]() ![]() Bro when are you gonna update |