Reviews for The Devilish Messiah |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Bro I'm begging for an update PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! I'M BEGGING ON MY HANDS AND KNEES FOR FUCKS SAKE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() really sucks that it hasn't been updated in 2 years, is the story dead? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry, Author. The damage you've done is irreversible. Kushina can't be a harem member now with how messed up her development was, I refuse to think she actually thought that. This fic is way to OC. No characters matched their personalities, so I would suggest editing this or rewriting them. I don't know, but I'm just being honest here. Need more character in depth. I liked the first two chapters, but then it all went downhill. you focused too much on Kushina and her behavior, and Naruto feelings. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are making me hate Kushina enough that I don't want her anymore in Harem... people keep voting for her because they probably want Naruto to put her in place... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, I was hoping for a montage of his training instead lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man, what a relief. You scared me with that recap lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() you've got to be fucken kidding me! a fucken recap that took half the chapter? man, if every chapter is like this, then nope, I'm out |
![]() ![]() ![]() followed even though its dead. Naruto has had a resurgence so u never know |
![]() ![]() Blood Covered Naruto would be a good bingo book handle. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I tried, I really did. I tried to give it a shot but this is quite possibly the most retarded story I've had the displeasure of reading. I couldn't and won't get to half of this bullshit that you written. How the most retarded stories on here keep getting the most people to follow it is beyond me. Like how do you guys actually think this is a great story? It's bad! I've read terrible neglect stories but this one is a league of its own in stupidity. Just delete it and stop writing this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love this fic. Hope there is more to come |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update soon I can't wait to see more chapters |
![]() ![]() So you are a complete clown who can only write pedo gangbang porn |
![]() ![]() Not sure I get the description of this story, made it seem he wouldn't get neglected and that's what happens within a few sentences of the story and yet he's he's happy about it instead of bitter? Terrible writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank goodness you abandoned this dogshit story. |