I love this take on evil King jaden! He's actually more real in this story. Its very refreshing. And im glad someone else sees that yubel isnt terrible. Plus, she actually is very pretty. I always loved fianceshippingalexisxjadens ship name to most) but the show really didnt developher character until the 4th season so i fell off of it. Im all in for spiritshippingjessexjaden) and yubel teaching jaden what love is and supporting them.

I love yubel. She is the most interesting character in gx really. So many emotional layers to her. I love jaden of course but i think yubel being bonded to him helped him develop and grow himself in the 4th season. I see shipping them, i do. Im just not on it. But i love them and thier bond nonetheless.

Anyway, I love this story and would love to see it continued! Reviews give insperation!as a writer i know the feeling lol)

Come on dude please update already

I was expecting this to be better. What a letdown.

Yo, Chessru, you mocking Higuchimon? Because if so, you're a true blue hero.

Awesome story. Update soon :D

Please keep it jaden x alexis

Asswipe... Just kidding, good chapter. As for the quality, it's alright, just Jaden in doubt.

more story

This sounds pretty interesting. Please continue. Jaden and Alexis forever.

This is really good. Will it have a happy ending?!

Awesome story! Please continue!:)

Nice, very nice. Needs more chapter

Good, please continue.

Shouldn't one eye be golden and the other orange instead of one golden and the other brown?

You have Kuriboh speaking English? Okay...weird, but how is Alexis suddenly able to not only see spirits but also understand them? (In the anime even Chazz couldn't understand Winged Kuriboh, he could see and hear it's coos.)

My advice is to not include a OC. Develop the characters you already have here. Yes they aren't originally yours, but this plot, this storyline is. We know what happens canonically in the series, but it ends where the show ends. You've changed that. You've made this your own - use this as a chance to make us want more from the characters already here. (Think about it this way, you see something on a menu at a restaurant. The name isn't important, and neither is the dish. You've had it before, it's a dish you know, you've had. What makes it interesting that you'd want it again? What's new, what's different?)

I know you want to improve your writing 'skillz' but it's much more challenging to keep the canon characters 'in-character'. If you include a OC at this point, you will fall into the trap most authors do when starting out in writing, in that you eventually make the story all about your OC, sidelining the original cast. Plus it's really easy to make your OC Mary-Sueish, and you wouldn't even know you're doing it.

Don't include an OC unless you really, really have too.