Reviews for etoiles
ipsa dixit chapter 1 . 1/25
this was, at the same time, the funniest and the best thing i've read oh my lord
first of all, i love the dRARRY HINTS IN IT
second of all, tHE MORAL. i want to live by that. that's such a good moral (is it even a moral?)
also, ahhhhhh dEAN AND SEAMUS AND RON AND HERMIONE shipshipshipshipshipship
'tweaking the circumstances' i love this, also :')
god, this was great, vic :)
antarcticas chapter 1 . 12/10/2017
i love how you showed everyone:) it's perfect
person chapter 1 . 12/10/2017
Simplify your summaries. They're too 'busy'. I can't focus on what's important because there are so many things happening. This could deter readers. Maybe instead be simple and cut all the dashes and unnecessary parentheses. Instead you could be sufficient and to the point like a real summary. Maybe don't put your challenges in the summary. That deters readers. Just trying to help.