It only just occurred to me in rereading this fic that Val, between her looks and her general "mad-scientist" mentality, could be Anton Sevarius' relative. It would explain how she got gargoyle DNA in the first place. (And why Zack's Mutate features reminded me of Goliath.)
Still excellent work, and still wishing for the back story with Allie and Caine in SF.

I LOVE Sparks! As sensitive as his dad and so precocious, he makes me laugh! He's a great addition to the Biker Mice family!
I don't know how, but you managed to create an entire subculture with its own rules and intricacies, and I love it!
But now I want the stories of how Val Tech got gargoyle DNA (and it's Disney's version, right?) and how Allie met Caine, Peter, and Kermit! May I, please?
(I read this first, still playing catch up, but loved re-reading it!)

I remember reading this series before and I am still just in awe of how you keep so many characters under control. I always lose a couple and don't notice until the rewrite lol

Okay, I'm not much of a TMNT fan. I will avoid crossovers with the bros, but you made this one work,and work REALLY WELL. I got engrossed with the whole mutate/Val Tech story and the dynamics of the Turtles with their ladies and Zack.
And the gargoyles DNA Zach had, that wouldn't happen to be from a certain group of ancient Scottish gargoyles that just happened to have been under a certain curse, would it?
Anyhoo, I loved every word!

I find it funny how you tell people not to use your OCs in their stories, while you shamelessly use other people's copyrighted OCs in yours. It is fanfiction, after all. It just comes across as rather hypocritical of you, is all I'm saying.

This story is very well done. I think you got the characters right on and your OC's are very good plus the detail that you put into this is some of the best that I have read! Keep up the good work!

Love the werewolves of london ref, lol!

great story, i'm totally hooked on your trilogy now! my friend told me to check them out and i havent watched BMFM religiously like her, but i'm loving the story!

hope youre going to keep writing?

Rio :)

Wow! i think i say this each time i read this! just wow,wow,wow!

please keep writing, i love your BMFM stuff! so awsome, i wasnt sure about Charley and Throttle, wasnt sure if they were quite right, but youve convinced me! you have them work really well together.

please keep writing, we need more stories like yours!

- louisa :)

great story is there any hope for a sequel?

Oh, Mikey. I'd kiss you if you weren't taken. You and Modo are just too sweet for your own goods.

Good fic, by the way. Truly enjoyable.

Onwards!

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Man I LOVE YOUR STUFF! I have read your fics on your site before.

I dig the Charly Throttle romance. :) Nothing against Vinnie or Carbine but I always thought they were good for each other.

o.0 Wow. I should've reviewed this fanfic when I read it a long time ago. Well, better late than never, right? ;)

First of all, I loved the story overall. You did a great job with the action sequences. You really kept everyone in character, and added so much more to their personalities. I cannot wait to read the next BMFM/TMNT crossover you're working on. Actually, yes I can. I know how busy you are with work, earing your masters, and stuff outside your life. I just mean that I'm looking forward to your other stories next chance you get.

Second, I loved the romantic moments with the individual couples. I have to admit, because of you and Morning, I'm slowly turning into a Charley/Throttle fan. If I got to see more episdoes when the show was on the air, I probably would've been a hardcore fan all along. I'm also liking Vinnie and Tala. I hope eventually she's able to open herself up to him more. That is, as soon as he stops being a moron. *laughs* And I loved the father/son moments between Modo and Sparks. I just hope that eventually, Modo will find himself a lady that will be good to him. Sweethearts like him only come around once in a blue moon. He deserves someone very special, and Sparks needs a mommy. *pause* Hey, in your next crossover, ya gonna introduce a new char that eventually becomes Modo's love interest? *pause* Wait...if you say so the suspense is ruined. All I can do is be patient and wait.

*pause* Wow, long review I left ya. And I gotta leave; I got a meeting in a few minutes. I'm a senator for everyone in the hall I live in at my university's dormitory. Good luck on all future endevours, and I look forward to reading more of your writings; be them fanfiction, or original novels.

That took two night of reading...but well worth it! That was an awesome amazing read! Two of my all time favorite cartoons thrown into one. It doesn't get much better than that. And it had everything...everything! Romance, adventure...and most importantly tons of sexual tension! Lol. Many Bookworm, remind me again why I haven't been reading your stuff? You've got talent girl!

I read the others two but wanted to submit a review for this one before I headed out for the weekend because I think it was my favorite.

I love all of your characters, even Tala...although I feel frustrated for everything she has to go thru. Poor kid had it rough. But anyway. Excellent reads! I'm very much looking forward to reading more!

Drea