Reviews for Nidhog |
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The Serene Being chapter 1 . 2/26/2018 UNDERSIDERS! I love the interactions that are possible there. Think about it Bitch gets a new alpha and Danny accidentally saves Lisa and Dinah. I just really want to see Coil get squished like toe jam. (Eww) |
X-Over Appreciator chapter 9 . 2/26/2018 She shouldn't I vote. |
c-wolf chapter 9 . 2/26/2018 Not wards. But maybe on call |
zanpaktospirit0 chapter 9 . 2/26/2018 No let nidhoggs daughter follow her father also its a badass image of Taylor on her fathers back as they charge into battle. |
firebluebird2006 chapter 9 . 2/26/2018 um wouldn't she need her fathers permission to join the wards? |
nuku nuku6 chapter 9 . 2/26/2018 It's a great story and I think she shouldn't join the Ward's. |
PerrinA chapter 9 . 2/26/2018 I say not being in the wards gives her the most flexibility. It shouldn't be hard for Danny to recruit (forcibly or otherwise) a great support structure for her. All he has to do is make the offer in person. Plus then she could pick up bounties or fix problems that the authorities have been ignoring, thereby actually helping the people. Which would fulfil her stated goals nicely but with more entertainment. |
WBXtreme234 chapter 9 . 2/26/2018 have her join the wards! |
Edale chapter 8 . 2/26/2018 My vote is that whichever vote wins, we get an omake of the losing scenario. ;) |
This danny chapter 8 . 2/26/2018 Is terrifying as shit |
Guest chapter 8 . 2/26/2018 wow what a wait for a chapter!...just wish the chapter was something more then a quick vague glance into a bunch of murders...can 15 sentences even be considered a chapter... |
Guest chapter 8 . 2/24/2018 *... his daughter, accused of the attempted murder of one of her best friends, Sophia Barnes, a girl who had saved both him and his daughter, on her way to the birdcage for violations from attempted murder, robbery, grand larceny, actual murder, and freaking bio-terrorism.* Change the comma after friends to a period. Right now, it looks like Emma tried to kill Sophia rather than Taylor. Also, it's "Sophia Hess" not Barnes, unless Alan adopted her or something. Might also want to nuke "violations from" as it doesn't fit in your current sentence. Would need tweaking to: "on her way to the birdcage for violations of parole as well as charges ranging from attempted murder, robbery, grand larceny, to actual murder and even freaking bio-terrorism." _ One thing puzzles me, why is Danny considered the 4th End Bringer, when your story has him appear before the actual End Bringers? See: He-With-Many-Hyphens review regarding timeline issues. Have no issue with the rest being AU. But this would be stuff that should be "time locked" to use a Whovian term. As for Taylor's powers. If she's still Arthropod based, rather than insects, as too many folks don't seem to know the difference (legs for one, insects 6, arachnids and scorpions, crustaceans 8.) Than Serket is the only "heroic" name I can think of. Egyptian Scorpion Goddess. Villain would be easier as Pestilence, one of Four Horsemen. As you've indicated she's got Danny's powers with slight modifications. Chitin over scales. Something decay related over napalm breath. Could be mist, touch, some type of toxin/venom/fluid transferred by bite or spit or even stinger. Not enough info at present. And on a side note, the mythological creature is apparently named Nidhogg rather than Nidhog. |
VitaminR9 chapter 8 . 2/24/2018 Wow really impressed with this story looking forward to more. |
shugokage chapter 8 . 2/22/2018 Interesting chapter! |
Edgar3t chapter 8 . 2/22/2018 Who is this Sophia Barnes? Cool story so far |