|Reviews for Reality Check -Chapter 1|
| densiloverxo chapter 1 . 4/3
This is soooo good I heard all the spoken bits in the characters voices and could actually see this being the scene you know?
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/12/2017
Very good! You really captured the characters voices!
| PrisonBreakFan08 chapter 1 . 12/13/2017
I like your twist on this scene. The "ex" comment from Jacob also made me cringe. I'm sure it felt good to yell at Jacob, even vicariously :)
What I always thought went against Sara's intelligence/intuition (call it however you'd like) is the fact that she had proof from T-Bag that Jacob was a bad guy and yet she let herself be convinced by him that it wasn't what she thought it was. I find it extremely insulting. As if only Michael was capable of being smart and Sara was just a dumb woman. Anyway, thanks for writing this!