Reviews for AI, Artificial Intelligence
Saissister chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
you need to poot speech into things like this for example "I cannot tell you"Said Harry. or something like that ect otherwise great
Serenity of the Lake chapter 1 . 6/11/2007
Please update soon! I want to find out what happens next! This is a great story, but you need to go into more detail about where harry has been.
tenshi noyo Ryu Taiga chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
dude, it started out so good! why didn't you finish? you totally have to.
Gohan00 chapter 1 . 3/18/2004
very very good please update soon though
Ariestar chapter 1 . 3/6/2004
It's writing!
HecateDeMort chapter 1 . 1/8/2004
continue this please
Jess16 chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
Is that like LoTR? The sword I mean. No.. wait it was called Anduril. Oh well. Great start to your story. I like it!
Firebreath Scarred chapter 1 . 11/21/2003
Great start! Swords rock!
Henriette chapter 1 . 11/16/2003
lovly,

please send me a e-mail when you update the next chapter.

Thanks
linky2 chapter 1 . 11/1/2003
Nice kill tommy boy
infiniteternity chapter 1 . 8/11/2003
when are you going to update ?
Keeper Darius chapter 1 . 3/22/2003
please continue this story it is great well for the first chapters

continue the story hp and the demon chronicle i like it
lulucats144 chapter 1 . 3/21/2003
sounds good. update soon
amythest chapter 1 . 3/21/2003
Well written and very origional. Because I just got out of school and am feeling nitpicky I thought I would point out a few things.

Harry disappears over the summer, but when he return he wields three sword’s…

Should be swords... No ' thingy

More like his soul it’s self was being pulled at…

Itself, right?

“If that was Durandal at his hip, than my god have mercy on Tom.” he said saddley to Fawkes…

Should be sadly, right?

Anyway, awsome story. I can't wait to find out how he got the sword and where he's been. Update more soon! :)
Afiyah B chapter 1 . 3/20/2003
Interesting. And cool. Keep writing.
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