|Reviews for Mending the Spirit|
| SixFtWookie chapter 9 . 8/10
I like it. Shame it seems abandoned.
| richardrobinsonjr chapter 7 . 8/26/2022
Impressive, definitely improved, very well written.
I don't believe I have seen Skitter in New Wave are showing their personalities in an interesting set of ways. I feel as though I know them as people not cardboard cutouts as they are often shown.
Taylor is a lot more realistic as an abused girl, who is recovering with friends, who can help.
This is one of your best works, I still like the Scion series, but this is superbly well done!
| richardrobinsonjr chapter 2 . 8/26/2022
Much better explanation for Sophia's attack. I. Can sympathize with the crazy girl.
I gather Emma is going for the Insane defence.
Definitely an improvement. I am looking forward to the rest of the rewritten material and any new stuff.
| TBearTech chapter 9 . 8/16/2022
great so far... slow build.
| Saphyron chapter 9 . 2/8/2022
Sad to see this story has been dropped. Hope you return one day. Needs more romance though :P
| CMVreud chapter 9 . 1/26/2022
Normally I am not for changing things too much, but this feels like the beginning of a wondeful New Wave.
Hope you are still alive and kicking.
| CMVreud chapter 7 . 1/25/2022
Okay, somewhat light on the Rage Dragon, but perhaps the luck of the others offsets her own "luck".
| CMVreud chapter 6 . 1/25/2022
"...don't try to take on a villain cape on your fist night out."
Like that ever stopped anyone
| CMVreud chapter 5 . 1/25/2022
"What?" Amy turned her vision in to study her genetics. There, small changes that she didn't
remember doing. "Oh, god. Oh, god."
And there is it. Wait! So she was it!
And the next villain up in arms? How's that for a setup. It is really nice to read how you improved as a writer.
| CMVreud chapter 4 . 1/25/2022
Why, by all tits of the Great Rat and Khornes left nut, is Taylor getting blonde...
Oh, wait, I forgot Amelia for a second. But it seems it was not Amelia.
I smell shenennigans afoot.
Also, nice tie in of Coil. I wonder how Tattle will tale.
| CMVreud chapter 3 . 1/25/2022
Okay, the Piggot paragraph could be more fleshed out... holy shi* that was what I wanted to say for chapter 2. Bah, when the words elude you... well, me.
But it's transitioning pretty good.
| CMVreud chapter 2 . 1/25/2022
Ooof. The escalation from "Sophia, what the heck?" onwards is a bit clunky, well, for my tastes, that's something you did better in your earlier work. The fight needs some polishing. It's nice that Flashbang got included, and the "wtf, Emma!".
And the rest feels nice, but like a rush job. Like you hadn't enough time to write it. How to say... It's not like a scene you'd write in *sigh* "Okay. What now?".
| CMVreud chapter 1 . 1/25/2022
Well, it certainly is a butterfly of the same species. Let's see where you stramlined this story and who just rose in the morning on a different foot.
| Spidersauce chapter 2 . 12/15/2021
. . . almost positive searching Taylor's house like that would be illegal. Your story though, can do what you like.
| Volusa chapter 9 . 10/9/2021
Not sure about ice powers in general (unless it's from Disney's Frozen bc reasons), Ice Man in XMen seemed kinda useless most times. Frozone from Incredibles was a bit better. Eh, with this and the other story I've read from you, you'll find a way to make ice powers cool. Also, good idea on New New Wave (Young Wave?) expanding beyond just Taylor!) On a side note, what would you have Emma trigger with, do you think? If she ever could trigger. IMO, she should triger as a natural Case-53, or find a vial marked Superpowers and it turns her monstrous. Anyways, wordwall rambling sory.
TLDR, this and the previous version were both rlly good!