Reviews for the celestial dragon slayer
Guest chapter 1 . 9/8
I like it
laurajustin chapter 14 . 9/5
Great story! Can't wait for the next update!
Lucy C heartfilia chapter 1 . 7/2
hi guest if you think I suck than why are you reading my story then so if you think it sucks then don't read it and good bye and good day
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28
Good evening I am also an author here, The Hand of Section XIII. While I am not able to login at the moment, I am willing to give you the top 10 reasons why your fic is not that good.

1 to 10 in order:

YOU SUCK!
YOU SUCK!
YOU SUCK!
YOU SUCK!
YOU SUCK!
YOU SUCK!
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YOU SUCK!
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YOU SUCK!

Browse my account if you want pointers. Good night!
FanFicWriter332 chapter 1 . 6/27
I loved it! The only thing is that some of the words in here are spelled wrong like Lucy's last name. The rest is amazing!
RavenAthos chapter 11 . 6/21
In my opinion you should skip galuna but have there be flash backs of what happened
kippy chapter 2 . 5/2
hahahahhahahahahhha so funny
Shinonome Haruhi chapter 3 . 3/10
Great idea! I look forward to future updates!
Lucy C heartfilia chapter 2 . 12/29/2017
thanks for the feedback it is still not finished
Guest chapter 2 . 12/22/2017
You should add more words, check for spelling and punctuation, more details (sorry if I sound like a critical teacher haha)