|Reviews for God's Blessing on Whatever Remains|
| GrumpyGrue chapter 1 . 4/2
Finally! The unicorn of RWBY fanfics where Schnee Corp. and mining work isn't being portrayed as unfair or racist on shaky reasoning and widespread fanon. It does the heart good to see young'uns pull themselves up by their bootstraps... instead of bitching needlessly, attacking cargo trains that provide defense for civilization, talking shit about Schnee and the "if you're not with us you're against us!" mentality, and the moody, backstabbing bitches in general (talking about you Blake! Not just doing that to the White Fang, but her Beacon team, family on Menagerie, etc.)
On the RWBY wiki, there's people pointing out why faunus doth protest too much on lots of things, including being given Menagerie. Actual things pointed out on maps and from in-show footage on why they suck.
Kazuma even if he was a NEET, knew enough of modern society to know he has it good as a miner. It's probably just lazy, dumb, lustful, spendthrift, greedy faunus that won't use birth control before they get promoted, rear huge families in a war economy and demanding welfare when people are trying to be conservative to not die to Grimm and faunus terrorists who demand nothing less than full capitulation of human governments because they "rayciss".
And faunus may be petty over losing the last war. Making themselves look like ingrates and losing opportunity to more honest and motivated individuals, in a dog eat dog world. Affirmative action, talk of reparations based on skin color, has been the windfalls of degenerates and greedy politicians, and always will involve racist bullshit that burdens people that did nothing wrong.
Really, Kazuma isn't even the age of majority for Earth culture, and already he's doing more fulfilling work than Earthern salarymen would lust after, from his account. Unless he's a dumbass that doesn't know anything, but I'd rather assume he stuck to being a NEET on Earth because he looked at the local work culture and job opportunities, then stuck to what he could scrape by with, on his informed decision.
Kazuma is tired at the end of the day, but he makes friends, it pays decently enough to live comfortably while still piling up what sounds like large savings in 8 months, with Aqua as a housewife to boot. Company subsidized housing too. Schnee corp does this for families, so it's likely that faunus can receive this housing too, if a young man with no work history can get this discounted rate. Has decent benefits package, and he's getting strong from the labor.
And the Konosuba crew look at the bright side, with Schnee bots providing good security. The good bots and disciplined military; cuts down on flamboyant huntsmen who attack nightclubs while blasting shotgun shells in crowded areas for the hell of it, or other nonsense. How many innocent lives ruined because hormonal teens with superpowers run amok?
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/2
Great so far
| JackFrost21 chapter 1 . 3/1
I'm sorry to see you aren't developing this idea more. I think you started out real strong though, given the timeline you mentioned towards the end, it could be hard to try and consider how the story would change if Amber was saved. I'll favorite and follow though, in case you ever come back to it.
| CallMeDaddy chapter 1 . 2/16
I love it, this fic was really good. Kazuma showing off his luck wich is on par of a goddess was great. Hope you retake this soon pal
| Rathaloski Mozsko chapter 1 . 12/25/2019
| OmegaUltima chapter 1 . 7/22/2019
Well, here's hoping that you eventually come back to working on this, too; really want to see where you take it
| Alphadelta-23 chapter 1 . 2/17/2019
come on.. please continue this.. PLEASE!
This is so intresting.. it is already so loved.. so please continue
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/21/2018
More please XD
| Soleimon Berserker chapter 1 . 8/15/2018
Please...PLEASE tell you you plan to continue this one at some point.
| DorkSideoftheMoon chapter 1 . 7/27/2018
Your grammar is good, which is great since this seems like a good start to a fic. It seems like the only characters from Konosuba will be Aqua and Kazuma, unless you plan on slowly introducing various characters from Konosuba. Kazuma is the “hero” so I assume his goal is to defeat Salem. For a Semblance, Kazuma should have something along the lines of being able to learn other people’s semblances to various semblances. Konosuba is great at making the characters powerful in some places and extremely weak in others so they’re not OP. Kazuma’s hypothetical Semblance could be incredibly powerful but useless if he didn’t have the skills to use them properly. Something like Qrow’s bad luck wouldn’t do anything for him, for instance, or Velvet’s mimicry. Will you be updating?
| Ol' Maddox chapter 1 . 7/18/2018
Curious how this goes.
| SilentXD7 chapter 1 . 4/3/2018
Very interesting story. I hope you continue with the series and I see great potential in this story.
| TomasDark chapter 1 . 3/15/2018
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/13/2018
The luckiest man alive meets the most unfortunate. You know he showed off his luck before he got his Aura unlocked. Would not be surprised if Qrow thought it was magic or supernatural based.
| Bunny153539 chapter 1 . 1/12/2018
Instead of Expie's of Megumin and Darkness, why not just use Megumin and Darkness? If we assume each world is an alternate dimension then it would be perfectly reasonable for a megumin and Darkness to be in this world too.