Reviews for Taylor gets a Bodyguard
erik chapter 7 . 9/30/2019
An engrossing story.
YeTianshi chapter 5 . 4/2/2019
Huh... Didn't even notice I got to the 5th chapter, the chapters are a bit short, thought I was on my 2nd. The story seems to move a bit too quickly with little explained, I think it would be much smoother if you described interactions with more depth, it probably would have been nice to see the conversation between the OC and Taylor from Taylor's perspective.
YeTianshi chapter 1 . 4/2/2019
Not gonna lie, stuff like this confuse the crap out of me. Why introduce a male/female character for a couple of paragraphs and then turn them into the opposite gender? I don't understand it, most of the time the complication never gets mentioned either, I really hope there is a point to it in the future chapters.
Face Yourself chapter 3 . 3/25/2019
I... wow, so like I said, the story idea was interesting, it's just... really poorly executed. That and I'm used to authors being clueless about PRT threat ratings, but power categories too...? This has gone from interesting to plain annoying between the pointless extra powers, utter irrationality of actions, and simple ignorance of the setting you're writing in.
Face Yourself chapter 2 . 3/25/2019
... So a perfectly normal guy instantly turns around and has no trouble killing people unprovoked, out of nowhere? There's a lot of things that basically dying and being dropped in another body will do to someone, but that is not one of them.
Face Yourself chapter 1 . 3/25/2019
You know... this sounds pretty interesting, but I somehow can't see "Lucy" giving Our Hero red hair, knowing it'll remind Taylor of Emma.
Edocsiru chapter 1 . 3/9/2019
Piggot good lady? Apologist much? If you want Armsmaster death you should want piggot burning on the stake lol
SeanHicks4 chapter 7 . 1/31/2019
Interesting take, looking forward to seeing some more
Guest chapter 1 . 9/15/2018
More More More More More More More More More More More More More More
carwash36 chapter 7 . 5/21/2018
the DragonBard chapter 1 . 3/21/2018
The Changer power mentioned is another Stranger power.
Stranger powers are stealth or infiltration based, like disguising yourself as someone else. If it can copy powers, it's a Trump power. Changer means you have a battle form like Hulk or Colossus from the X-Men

Striker powers means a close range power. Just knowing Kung Fu doesn't count, and at most would be a Thinker power.
PasiveNox chapter 7 . 3/17/2018
It’s great
shugokage chapter 7 . 3/10/2018
Interesting chapter and scene!
AnimeA55Kicker chapter 7 . 3/10/2018
At this rate worm is going to run out of villains.
AnimeA55Kicker chapter 6 . 3/10/2018
Giant. Brass. Balls.
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