Reviews for Night Moves
Ang chapter 4 . 1/1/2018
Love it great chapter so happy to have found a new fix that is so well written. I'll be looking out for your updates!
phieillydinyia chapter 4 . 1/1/2018
Nice!
Guest chapter 4 . 12/30/2017
Wow, this is so impressive! Amazing writing!
L.Little'sFanFic chapter 3 . 12/28/2017
Another hot chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens next with the two of them. Great job
Guest chapter 3 . 12/27/2017
Wow! Just right and not too over the top. Much more believable than a lot of sex scenes.
L.Little'sFanFic chapter 2 . 12/27/2017
Another hot chapter even with the little things that where in the text
L.Little'sFanFic chapter 1 . 12/27/2017
That was a hot chapter. Glad chapters 2 & 3 are up as I can't wait to read more.

Also if you can go to the site on your phone and not use the app, It should let you add the page break.
John Horvath chapter 3 . 12/26/2017
That was intense! Just the way it's meant to be! Mileven is like a reminder to a damaged world of a much better time that's long overdue to make a comeback! This was the kind of intensity that Jan & I lived for as long as she lived, whether the day barely allowed us enough time to get dressed to go take care of the responsibilities married couples tackle as teams or whether it was one of our weekend nights when we could just keep coming back for more until the most we had enough energy left to do was to curl up together into a comfortable position for falling asleep. Great new chapter to a great story! Thank you!
phieillydinyia chapter 3 . 12/26/2017
Nice
Drummergrl96 chapter 1 . 12/23/2017
Love this
John Horvath chapter 2 . 12/21/2017
Impressive Mileven smut so far. There was a reason girls in the 80's started going more for headbanger guys than for jocks all of a sudden. We became Heavy Metal Gods to the girls because most of us had a "girls cum first" rule and it was common knowledge that 69 was our favorite number. I was lead singer & rhythm guitarist in a band called "Rollin' Numbers" back then. LOL
Guest chapter 2 . 12/18/2017
Loved it
353days chapter 2 . 12/17/2017
I need mooooreeeeee lol
Haihryejbfu chapter 2 . 12/17/2017
Can’t wait for next chapter
phieillydinyia chapter 2 . 12/17/2017
Oooh! Hahah nice chapter
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