Reviews for Struggle and Strife
TYPE-RWBYFanatic64 chapter 1 . 12/16/2017
Sorry to correct you but the Fusion Sword consists of 6 blades:
1 Main center sword
2 teethed back blades
2 short side swords
1 front Hollow blade
Look up concept art for the Fusion Sword.
Boop chapter 1 . 12/16/2017
Run for your virginity, it could come under attack at any moment
merendinoemiliano chapter 1 . 12/16/2017
interesting beginning, i just hope he won't be paired with Raven(it would be just dumb)
Mr.PuffPuff chapter 1 . 12/16/2017
You have my attention,please continue at your earliest convenience.
LL chapter 1 . 12/16/2017
That has gotten creepy, has Raven one day come upon Cloud practice his fire spells and then stalk him for a while then thought he somehow gotten Maiden powers and want him in her "family"?

Cloud is not going be happy about this but it is at least better than being found out by Salem I think.
LunarCatNinja chapter 1 . 12/16/2017
Hm. Interesting. Very interesting. I'd not thought about a FFVII RWBY crossover before! Tis a fascinating idea! I look forward to where you take this.
X3runner chapter 1 . 12/16/2017
Nice story it is incredibly well written has good pacing and is an intresting take on the Arc famaly. I do wonder what mordred ment did she want him to be like a little side kick an über Doting/clingy sibling later on or was she planing for when she gets really old. Also if jaune looks like cloud a guy who could pass for a woman while being beside Tifa and Aerith Is he going to be confused as a maiden in disguise since his powers fit the bill kind of. I hope to see this story develop
Guest chapter 1 . 12/16/2017
Oh, this is great! Definitely awesome humor parts there, especially the materia relearning. Can't wait to see how the encounter with Raven goes, heh.
kyugan chapter 1 . 12/16/2017
Here's hoping Jaune Cloud van Arc follows Barrett's advice and doesn't fuck up.
casper2222 chapter 1 . 12/16/2017
excellent start of an first chapter that will make a fine story
keep up the good work :)
hellfire45 chapter 1 . 12/16/2017
Good chapter and I can’t wait to see how the rest of this goes
Bunny153539 chapter 1 . 12/16/2017
Oh holy shit, this seems like it could be better then even Exaulted... To early to tell though...
TrueSamael chapter 1 . 12/16/2017
That's gotta be a hell of a childhood to have your dad regularly question if you're an alien or not.

I'm actually looking forward to this, it's fantastic.
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