Reviews for Struggle and Strife
ParadoxReader chapter 9 . 5/13/2020
This story is getting better the more I read but really don't like Blake self entitled self righteous feel... Kind alike a first world have it all from upper middle class lady decided to hypocritical critise others and the system her place have along with other stuff while her hypocrisy runs deep in her own life and ways... Just like how she tend to judge others harshly but expect it to not happen to what she wants... I do hope other character especiallyember of Jnpr have a good and great presence later on since i love their interaction and family feel and potential for character development a lot... Not to mention they will be perfect for jaune weirdness and allow him acceptance rather than the rest that will be quite forced at best
MM Browsing chapter 9 . 5/12/2020
What will jaune/cloud will do with the video and picture from the ruin? Won’t he likely give it to the hunter school and the council? Showing the elder and ancient grimm not to mention what it assume a brain grimm that the council would most likely mistake it but ozpin would know the truth

About jaune/cloud summon can he also chocobo and moogle after all it did show from final fantasy 7

Since jaune/cloud isn’t gadgetry, tinkering, and engineering but moogle then jaune can summon hundreds of them like chocobo summon and help jaune build Cid Highwind except maybe better like a rocket engine, shield, and cannon since he would need if he face flying grimm in his delivery service. On that note moogle can also help jaune mail service, Mognet

Have hundred of moogle ride with hundred chocobo

Moogle would be useful having magic and dimensional pocket and radar seeking treasure

I can only imagine the reaction when the customer receive their package from floating moogle and leave with chocobo
Other would be too stun to realize what happen while children squeal seeing something cute

BTW will there be any Final Fantasy 7 Remake items like healing potion and ether

About jaune weapon will he also bring crocea mors being extra weapon apart from Fusion Swords
will you going to create a more advance version of aura uses like a aura radar like fox in team cyfv and glyph
maybe jaune will meet qrow and like his weapon decide to make the same weapon as qrow and add with his fusion sword

hope to see more chapter soon
Guest chapter 9 . 5/12/2020
Great chapter really hope the next one doesn't take as long, also still want Blake to at the very least apologize for dismissing Jaune and looking down on him from before.
Kazragoth chapter 9 . 5/12/2020
To quote the parachute scene:

"Wait! Give me a minute!"
"No."
"Why do you have to be such a hardass, bro?"
"I ain't your bro."

It's because he's a hardass that we get to see these hilarious scenes. Just seeing Cloud shut down Sienna Khan in nothing less than 10 words makes me want to laugh so hard, especially the aftereffects, delivered ever so smoothly like his rejections.

Never change, Cloud. Never change.
Jebest4781 chapter 9 . 5/11/2020
man this was great and can't wait for the Dust War to commence with what's about to come into play
Jebest4781 chapter 8 . 5/11/2020
man this was really enjoyable and wonder what else is in store
Jebest4781 chapter 7 . 5/11/2020
man this was utterly fantastic! enjoyed the fight immensely and I really can't wait to see more of Cloud/Jaune kicking serious ass
Jebest4781 chapter 6 . 5/11/2020
can't wait to see how the fight turns out
Jebest4781 chapter 5 . 5/11/2020
This was quite fun
Jebest4781 chapter 4 . 5/11/2020
Will be fun to see Cloud get back into his merc routes and help deal with the Grimm
Jebest4781 chapter 3 . 5/11/2020
This was pretty fun
Jebest4781 chapter 2 . 5/11/2020
Pretty decent chapter
mc.zero chapter 9 . 5/11/2020
lmao, Cloud's reaction to the Heroes call is hilarious
Jebest4781 chapter 1 . 5/11/2020
This is gonna get interesting
Snappy Flowah chapter 9 . 5/11/2020
Hah! Atlas has nothing on our boi Cloudy!Jaune. Just a couple of big summons woul be enough to annihilate their puny 'kingdom'!
I propose that Jaune would be the one to claim this treasure trove for himself, or at least take the majority of it, and quickly establish himself as a big power, one that shouldn't be messed with.
After all, we all want to the king of the castle, don't we?

~Snappy~
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