|Reviews for To Hell and Back|
| Guest chapter 164 . 2/26
Will savitar be a part of this fic?
| Geri90 chapter 164 . 1/4
I love your story but I'm feeling very murderous at another cliff hanger
| cieloiy10 chapter 164 . 12/26/2022
she is pregnant or holding a baby?
| LycoXTheTempGues chapter 164 . 12/23/2022
Holy hell what a season finale so to speak!
| WilyGryphon chapter 164 . 12/23/2022
This was intense. Good luck with the Lauriver story. I might give that a read when it's posted, and I'll be looking forward to Arc V Act V. (The divisions of the acts probably only make sense to you and the planning phase, frankly; as for a reader's perspective, I'm really just rolling with what you're saying about the acts, especially since the Arcs are numbered the same way.)
I guess I was wrong about the Shadows at the Sacred Grounds having Mirakuru in them, but I was otherwise correct (aside from the trap not culminating there).
I have a slight idea about what piqued Joe's interest, based on my (minimal) knowledge of the tie-in comic surrounding Malcolm. But I don't know what the significance would ultimately be. I'm definitely interested in what had happened to Nyssa.
| AspiringAuthor236 chapter 164 . 12/23/2022
You suck. You would have the craziest cliffhanger and decide to hop on a new story. Nyssa is with child, Eddie tryna kill Eobard and the Flash, Oliver is Ra’s (god i hope he somehow stays as Ra’s and Green Arrow), Kara and Kal are on argo. and NOW you wanna write a new story instead of giving me the sweet conclusion i crave.
| KuroArashi94 chapter 164 . 12/23/2022
It's pretty obvious what's up with Nyssa but I won't say. great chapter
| WilyGryphon chapter 163 . 12/22/2022
Fantastic duel between the top fighters in the setting. And the hierarchy of power is shifting. (Hopefully without getting gutted and rebooted.)
I take it that Athena was a mole and the pincer Shadows were loyal to Tommy and given Mirakuru, all for the latter's trap. Tommy used Athena to relay the intel (true and false) that Malcolm was alive and that Thea was his daughter. And Malcolm didn't have the slightest idea. (I guess Tommy turned Athena recently while conducting his own covert business.)
| TheMaster4444 chapter 159 . 12/18/2022
You have every reason to feel proud of the Barry-Eobard-Eddie scene at the start. It's a very strong opener that does a great job of following up on explaining last chapter's cliffhanger and tightening the focus on Barry and Eobard, only to effectively blindside the reader with Eddie erupting and taking control out of nowhere at the very end. His old grudge against The Flash manifesting in his fury at Eobard is genuinely terrifying. Well done!
| WilyGryphon chapter 158 . 12/17/2022
So this is the earliest timeline version of Thawne... from the future... long after Barry faced him already... Dang time travel. It's—It's the Thawne from the Season 2 episode where he met Flash for the first time from his perspective. And since Eddie didn't kill himself, Eobard is manipulating him into becoming Cobalt Blue to be a threat to Flash.
My suspicion is that Tommy and Joe leaked the fact that Malcolm was alive and spread the lie that Thea was Malcolm's daughter to lure Ra's out to trap him, the League of Assassins, and Malcolm.
I love Malcolm and the Queens' reactions to Athena saying "We have [Malcolm's] daughter."
| nliochristou chapter 158 . 12/17/2022
the therapist was Eobard Thawne!? i mean i suspected something was not right about the doctor, but not that he was the Reverse Flash!
| WilyGryphon chapter 157 . 12/16/2022
Ooh. I was sure that Dr. Shelby was manipulating Eddie and pushing him to villainy, and I expected some connection to Thawne and whatever happened to him at the end of his arc, but I did not expect Shelby to be connected to the Negative Speed Force. Aryton Shelby has no reference in the DC Database Wiki, so I wonder who he really is.
| WilyGryphon chapter 155 . 12/14/2022
Kara and Kal made it to Argo! Kal finally gets to experience real Kryptonian culture and meet his Aunt Alura. Barry is on the case and is about to face the dark truth about Eddie. (Of course, considering how close we're getting to his comics counterpart, will we be seeing that "other" secret about him?) And Ralph knew Barry was The Flash. He always could smell a mystery.
I'm looking forward to what happens next.
| KuroArashi94 chapter 150 . 12/8/2022
Oh? Superboy incoming perhaps? Either that or the JL have to get very creative here
| TheMaster4444 chapter 148 . 12/6/2022
Why do I get the feeling that Reign's first appearance is going to involve brutally killing Astra while she's filling in for Kara?