|Reviews for What Do We Do Now|
| TinaMaki chapter 25 . 5/18/2014
That was awesome. And very cute !
| TinaMaki chapter 3 . 5/18/2014
Awww, Snape is a real softie... So cute ;)
| Griffin Raven chapter 24 . 5/13/2014
I can't help wondering if the magic that makes up Hogwarts allowed for Salazar's portrait not to be found until now by Daylan whereas before that it was hidden. Perhaps it has something to do with Daylan being of Salazar's bloodline that allowed him to see? Or could the house elves have recently moved the portrait to they because Hogwarts told them to? Honestly with the amount of magic that must have been used to not only build Hogwarts but also the amount of magic that's been used inside her since the school was built - it does seem possible for the castle to be aware of what goes on inside it? How else to the house elves know so much about her and the amount the Headmaster knows of its wards, so it does seem likely that not only the castle herself, the house elves, ghosts and wandering portraits know a great deal of what has gone in the past and present within the castle?
| Griffin Raven chapter 23 . 5/13/2014
Hmm..could they not find out information about Daylan's possible heritage to Salazar Slytherin's family line from the goblins at Gringotts - might they not already either know if its true; or have a way to test for it? Certainly wouldn't ask for the Ministry to find out as that places seems to have too much in common with a sieve, if you ask me! Brilliant story by the way.
| Griffin Raven chapter 8 . 5/12/2014
I guess Daylan's telepathic abilities enable him to communicate with other regards if there skilled at occulumency or not. Either getting through people's shields or simply going around them or slipping under them in someway.
| klt1 chapter 25 . 12/1/2013
Love this story! Yet another superb story xxx
| Guest chapter 25 . 11/20/2013
That was sweet!
| TherSia chapter 25 . 9/26/2013
Whoah! I like mini Draco and "Daylan". Although I feel you make "Daylan" so weak and too fragile here. I absolutely love good Lucius and Narcissa here.
| Ghoul99 chapter 25 . 8/21/2013
I love it
| jules3677 chapter 25 . 4/12/2013
I had such difficulty reading your story. Not that I dissing the plot. The plot was excellent. But you had a totally OOC Severus Snape. He has never been emotional enough to cry (where anyone could see or hear it, especially in front of Dumbledore), his vocabulary was simplified and there wasn't any sarcasm from the man. Magical castles' don't have light switches (sconces) nor alarm clocks (tempus spell used). Your Chapter 12 & 13 totally threw me, after a while I assumed you forgot to delete one of the chapters. Reading your story Jocelyn arrived after a week, but Daylan had only been there a night, Dumbledore discusses with Snape what to do so that his son is not discovered as The-Boy-Who-Lived a few days before. My reading of all this is that your timelines may have gotten confused.
It was nice that Snape & Jocelyn fell in love (imagine having Minevra as your MIL). Daylan got his hearing back but the bad man Voldemort again caused him pain & the loss of his hearing. I liked Daylan being a telepath, that was ingenious. Also being a little wolf cub, too cute for words!
Thankyou for an entertaining story. I hope you continue to write. You have a lot of potential. I look forward to reading more of your completed stories. Thankyou.
| Sea Sire chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
i loved it. is there going to be a sequel?
| MySlytherinLovelies chapter 13 . 2/7/2013
I think you should know that chapters 12 and 13 are the same. Anywho's, I love this story. Great job so far!
| Silver Moon Huntress chapter 25 . 1/1/2013
...oookay. This story confused me but I understand it mostly now. I give it a perfect 10. •
| Chloelilybet chapter 13 . 11/14/2012
This chapter is a copy of the second half of chapter 12
| Mila Pink chapter 25 . 9/26/2012
I loved the fic.
Falls in love with her.
It was very well written and I loved that Harry had a family at the end.