Reviews for Mending the Knots
Axcel chapter 1 . 3/29/2018
I would think Remnant would accept brothels due to morale being synonymous with survival in their world.
Axcel chapter 1 . 3/29/2018
I'm hoping Jaune lands all those ladies. They're great people even without their looks. Besides, Jaune is the show's buttmonkey yet never gives up. He, like Naruto and many other shounen leads, deserves a lot of karmic repayment for that.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/29/2018
I am leaning on Arkos.
and I'm leaning away from this story, sorry dude if you like Arkos that's fine, but I have honestly seen so much Arkos at this point I'm starting to get tired of it, unless it's part of a harem I'm fine with it, but if this just sorely Arkos then I'm dropping it, sorry.
Blinded in a bolthole chapter 7 . 3/25/2018
Racism is both natural and stupid. Natural because we all have a sort of "us Vs them" mentality somewhere down there and stupid because it deprives one of all the potentials of the ones one discriminates.
Josh Spicer chapter 2 . 3/22/2018
"Please for the love of Oum, don't make the sword turn into a woman who needs a massage."

I can't stop laughing. Oh my god, I'm getting Imyoshi flashbacks to Gold.
LordOwl chapter 7 . 3/21/2018
Oh man, I'm always so excited when I see updates from you. Look forward to reading more about Jaune the Masseuse :D
R-king 93 chapter 7 . 3/20/2018
Great chapter, keep up the good work.
zorro99 chapter 7 . 3/20/2018
A part of me wants this to turn mildly tragic where even with all his hard work and learning, Jaune still gets rejected because no one cares enough to take the time and help and train him. He can study books and work out all he wants, but he still needs to actually learn how to fight and use Aura for which he needs another person. As has been established, Beacon has standards, and I figure they would rather have a group of students who have had experienced Huntsmen teach and guide them in everything they need to know rather than one guy who taught himself the material without any chance to really put it into practice.
psp reader chapter 7 . 3/20/2018
Neo... damn, lol. Surprised Oreo did not become buddies with CRDL, ah well. They deserved it
stormfly57 chapter 7 . 3/19/2018
ff15 storyline depressing as in disappointing as in it made you sad?
the Composcreator chapter 7 . 3/19/2018
So i reread this and i'm glad i did. i noticed that in the Phyrra chapter you revealed that there were multiple attempts at unlocking Jaune's Aura in the past. I don't know how i missed that the first time.

Here is a suggestion...bring in Lisa Lavender! gossip reaches about a great place taht serves faunus and humans, she investigates, and gives it great praise! This would open an avenue for the Arc family to learn what Jaune has been up to. To expand on that, you can have Gramps show up the same day as other major characters like NPR, RWBY, CFVY, and Lisa herself. they detect the akward meeting, back out a bit, but listen in on the two Arc's talking.

Heck, where is Grampa? i figured he would have shown up at Beacon by now. i can imagine him tearing Ozpin a new one for turning down his favor. Especially when Cardin tries to get payback. not to mention that Oreo guy. heck, i see Gramps as the kind of guy to view Phyrra's tournaments as more spectacle and gambling entertainment than actual combat, so he would not watch it and in turn the rest of the family saw no need to watch it.

Please for the love of Oum, don't make the sword turn into a woman who needs a massage. if you make an Omake out of it, fine. just don't make it a real thing otherwise i will drop this story!
Guest chapter 7 . 3/19/2018
I like how fast/slow it's going, and how the characters interact with each other. When are you gonna bring in Team RWBY tho...

Alex TF chapter 7 . 3/19/2018
Lol edible oil. Jaune is to naive indeed.
Theseus chapter 7 . 3/18/2018
I really like this story. The only problem I have is that it leaves me wanting to read more!
theawsomest5 chapter 7 . 3/18/2018
I love these NonHunter!Jaune stories and you just cemented my love for them with your amazing writing!
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