Reviews for Mending the Knots
Spangle Jenks chapter 5 . 2/1/2018
Mental picture taken, saving to archives! Lol way to go Jaune what I would do to be in your position haha. Loved the chapter, love the fic, love your writing haha. Can’t wait for the next chapter please keep up the good work!
Draco38 chapter 5 . 2/1/2018
I have enjoyed the whole story so far, but really enjoyed this chapter. I agree with adislt though, Glynda would not put up with Cardin and crew over this! Oreo, is another story and she would be bound to push the 'make it work' idea. Well until she found out he kept trying to get in bed with her! Then it's HAMMER TIME!

Keep up the good work!
JohnCena117 chapter 1 . 2/1/2018
alright another chapter.
X3runner chapter 5 . 2/1/2018
Nice chapter the team setup seems realistic.
TheAccountIUseForReading chapter 5 . 2/1/2018
Good work on the new chapter mate, I really love how you portrayed Pyrra's problems with her team, I think you might have hit the nail on the head with that one, being put on a pedestal couldn't have been a good thing for her social life, and I'm glad that you make it seem real. And with Pyrra's bullying, it's almost like Jaundice in a way, I would come up with a pun with her name to describe her situation, but it'd most likely be a Phyrric Victory...
Yeah, see, terrible.
Anyhow, I can't really complain too much about this chapter, I think the only thing I coulf complain about would be me getting into this on chapter one, as much as I hate waiting for stories to finish, I must say, yours is one of the rare few that make it worth the wait.
(Also I love how you fit that little Arkos moment in there, you tease~)
Anyhow, I can't wait till you post a new chapter!
Ohh... and if you manage to read this, I really do love your stories Azndrgn, you're one of my favorite authors on this site, I always look forward to when I get an email saying you posted something...
I won't waste anymore of your time, have a good day!
- Isra.
Rasengalia chapter 5 . 2/1/2018
Excellent story. Can’t wait for Oreo and Cardinal to get what they deserve. Looking forward to seeing the next update.
DrknssRules1 chapter 5 . 2/1/2018
I really enjoyed this chapter, it was very well written and the Jaune/Pyrrha scenes were adorable. I'm hoping Jaune gets the opportunity to beat Oreo's ass now that he has aura. Like Pyrrha makes the appointment and as she's getting her massage, Oreo tries to butt in or something so Jaune just throws him through a wall or something, that would just be freakin awesome and I would laugh my ass off. Again, loving this story, keep it up. Until next time.
psp reader chapter 5 . 2/1/2018
Will Oreo ever get eaten? That would be grand, lol. Lovely chapter and interaction between Jaune and Pyrrha. Ill wait for the pairing/s later. Thanks! Till then
edboy4926 chapter 5 . 2/1/2018
Awesome chapter
Finally he has Aura.
Wonder what his Semblance will be.
acw28 chapter 5 . 2/1/2018
Favorite chapter so far, can't wait to see Jaune "teach" Oreo a few things about being a gentleman...
Skykitsune chapter 1 . 1/23/2018
Very lovely story already.
Chaotic Pheonix chapter 4 . 1/22/2018
Roman is awesome in this I mean it
EnigmaWriter21 chapter 4 . 1/20/2018
I really like this story. Granted I like any story, where the character, goes the civilian route. Kinda like someone story with Jaune as a Bartender.
NopticIllusion chapter 4 . 1/20/2018
Each and every chapter so far has been absolutely flawless, this is too good, I think I’m becoming addicted, in a good way!
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