Reviews for Mending the Knots
Stratos263 chapter 1 . 1/16/2018
Good job on the start
Chaotic Pheonix chapter 3 . 1/15/2018
I can already tell that Cinder will find out
Yifto chapter 3 . 1/14/2018
Interesting I see the setup in this chapter. Kinda sad jaune won't make it to fulfill his dream to be a huntsman since cinder and all that ruin it this year
s10019 chapter 3 . 1/13/2018
poor jaune the fall of beacon happens this year
Bambamsut24 chapter 3 . 1/12/2018
Really great work keep it up this is very intresting
Rakkis3059 chapter 3 . 1/12/2018
Some interesting plot developments here. I love how you have himted at things to come with only Jaune able to wield Crocea Mors and i am looking forward to finding out how is grandfather reacts to his new situation, and seeing him confront Ozpin about welching on his favor.
DrknssRules1 chapter 3 . 1/11/2018
I kinda want the next chapter to just start out with Ozpin in his office and then Jaune's grandfather just bursts in like "What the fuck!?", lmao. I assume he will but if just started like that I would just laugh. Really digging this story man, keep it coming.
willcraftNEX chapter 3 . 1/11/2018
my god, this is good, please continue this, I need more fics like this
I0-Hopeful Heart Dragon chapter 3 . 1/11/2018
Hey Author, great story, but here a idea for your story if your willing to use it or not your choice, but the idea is if you could have monumental reason for Ozpin to have Jaune as a Huntsmen beside his grandfather favor, but Jaune's grandfather should/could have 2 reason of Jaune being a Huntsmen, the first reason is for Jaune to follow his dream, but the second reason is his grandfather has a secret that has Jaune as a huntsmen or sometime bad will happen if he's not.
yomunot chapter 3 . 1/11/2018
Decent read, though the part with the whole faunus exposition could have been saved for laterpossibly for Blakes massage
OBSERVER01 chapter 3 . 1/11/2018
very nice.
Vai chapter 3 . 1/10/2018
Always fun to read! I can see it now, word spreads among the faunus of an amazing massage parlor that doesn't care about race. That news eventually makes its way to the White Fang, and soon Juane has to give Adam a massage while Roman rushes over to save him from being killed.

Keep up the good work!
cgMarche chapter 3 . 1/10/2018
I really like the way you are doing some things differently than other similar stories. I hope you let Jaune follow his dream of becoming a Hunter, with the help of his Grandfather, clients and friends.
JBSmartypants chapter 3 . 1/10/2018
I really enjoy the story. It's very well written and I didn't see any mistakes please keep writing.
Fantasy OH YEA chapter 3 . 1/10/2018
I love this as always and I hope you keep up the good work but don’t let Jaune go to Beacon too early, I enjoy the shop and I hope you keep up the good work. I love
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