Good job on the start

I can already tell that Cinder will find out

Interesting I see the setup in this chapter. Kinda sad jaune won't make it to fulfill his dream to be a huntsman since cinder and all that ruin it this year

poor jaune the fall of beacon happens this year

Really great work keep it up this is very intresting

Some interesting plot developments here. I love how you have himted at things to come with only Jaune able to wield Crocea Mors and i am looking forward to finding out how is grandfather reacts to his new situation, and seeing him confront Ozpin about welching on his favor.

I kinda want the next chapter to just start out with Ozpin in his office and then Jaune's grandfather just bursts in like "What the fuck!?", lmao. I assume he will but if just started like that I would just laugh. Really digging this story man, keep it coming.

my god, this is good, please continue this, I need more fics like this

Hey Author, great story, but here a idea for your story if your willing to use it or not your choice, but the idea is if you could have monumental reason for Ozpin to have Jaune as a Huntsmen beside his grandfather favor, but Jaune's grandfather should/could have 2 reason of Jaune being a Huntsmen, the first reason is for Jaune to follow his dream, but the second reason is his grandfather has a secret that has Jaune as a huntsmen or sometime bad will happen if he's not.

Decent read, though the part with the whole faunus exposition could have been saved for laterpossibly for Blakes massage

very nice.

Always fun to read! I can see it now, word spreads among the faunus of an amazing massage parlor that doesn't care about race. That news eventually makes its way to the White Fang, and soon Juane has to give Adam a massage while Roman rushes over to save him from being killed.

Keep up the good work!

I really like the way you are doing some things differently than other similar stories. I hope you let Jaune follow his dream of becoming a Hunter, with the help of his Grandfather, clients and friends.

I really enjoy the story. It's very well written and I didn't see any mistakes please keep writing.

I love this as always and I hope you keep up the good work but don’t let Jaune go to Beacon too early, I enjoy the shop and I hope you keep up the good work. I love