Reviews for Journey of the King: The Will of D |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i hope you come back this is fing AWESOME |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hola, me encantó esta historia, Kaya pirata no es algo que veas mucho y me gusta lo sabio que se ve luffy, se ve que tiene la ambición de la cima. Gracias y espero que lo actualices por favor. |
![]() ![]() I love this work any chance you r going to continue this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Called it. :) Thanks for your work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kaya is a Pirat in the making. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Story |
![]() ![]() ![]() i wonder if sea kings can learn haki. imagine luffy riding a haki coated nina into marineford during the summit war. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I fucking love it! can't wait to see what will happen! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this. The characterization is amazing, making the characters resemble who they are supposed to be, instead of being OOC. The humor is spot on. The group dynamics and dialogue is superb. The changes (of the crew) are welcome. The only thing which kinda detracts is the whole Luffy TEACHING, which is heavily OOC. can't wait for more. PS: I love how you're portraying Alvida, reminds me of Hancock and I can barely wait until these two meet. I can see the rivalry already. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the history! A shame it doesnt have more chapters T_T |
![]() ![]() ![]() look alvida become hot beyond hot like literally went all "go beyond plus ultra" in the looks department |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, the ocean water thing is wrong, but it's a pretty good chapter, and the lion thing is Great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mmm, this looks pretty good actually. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story if you can please update |
![]() ![]() Doooonc ? Tu met a jour ou ont dit au revoir comme aux reste de tes histoires ? |