Reviews for The House of a Thousand Dead Suns |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. She's pregnant. The build up to it was fantastic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting story! Great writing :) |
![]() ![]() Love love love thiz |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi I’ve finally caught up with the chappiesanyway when I first read this fic I wasn’t aware of yurikos yakuza past...(I thought she was just in an abusive realationship) anyway I’ve written a similar oc insert half Japanese, also an exploited teen, because japan’s sex industry and acceptance had fascinated and disgusted me in some degree(still does). A childhood friend working there told of her experience seeing school girls being assaulted in the train and it was like a regular occurrence there.. living in a different country(also Asian) I can’t judge as maybe I’m not getting the whole picture and these things happen everywhere and I shouldn’t stereotype but I can relate on some level and I’m really in awe of your storytelling because it is realistic. Even if you wrote this with fiction in mind, I hope that the yurikos and maemi of today have their freedom(or may those pig men who think girls/women are playthings go die in a fire...) ok thank u, hope u update:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Adorable, I simply love her character development! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wowowowowow so good. Take my heart and soul just give me more please. Reward my unworthy mortal shell of flesh and weakness. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can’t wait for the next update. I like how Yuri is a mother of three despite the age difference. I like how she is caring to naruto and Sasuke. I can’t wait for the next update. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You created a compelling character and I wait patiently for her interactions with both Itachi and Kakashi. I have yet to be disappointed, and I don't think I ever will be due to your writing style. I really like it because you pay attention to detail. Also, you've written child-Naruto and Sasuke cute as buttons! Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() yeah so a suicidal person having a kid probably isnt a good idea? |
![]() ![]() ![]() When I see "toothpick" I thought of Genma ngl |
![]() ![]() ![]() Agreed. Fucking bastard. What the hell is it with the guys leaving leaves all over the damn place! Also, love how the whole Naruto situation went down. So fluffy. One day, I really want to see her go Super Saiyan on Hiruzen’s ass. She has the eyes, and she is a strong woman (cough if you ignore her none existent muscles) so kicking him the balls should work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This poor girl has so many people relying on her |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is amazing!~ |