Reviews for All On MY Mind
Evil Midget Turtle chapter 2 . 2/1/2007
One, I find this a fascinating way to look at Kitchel and Thatz's relationship. While they do bicker, it seems exceedingly obvious as we move through the manga that there is something more between them than just rivals and allies. Two, I love the parallel you created to draw them together; it is quite inventive to have Kitchel now experiencing exactly what made Thatz a Dragon Knight. I agree with your view on how sad it is that no one writes much on Thatchel. They mix the romance and humor into one, and happen to be my absolute favorite pair. We truly need more of this kind of story between them and less of the strange yaoi stories that consist of nothing but two random characters suddenly falling madly in love. Thank you.
ojosnegro chapter 2 . 12/29/2004
OMG! YEY! U updated! It was as perfect as the first one! I'm so glad u did! Thank You! Thank You Thank You! lol!

It's soo cool to see both of their pionts on view!

I hope u can email me!

aquajogger chapter 2 . 12/28/2004

Okay, okay. I got halfway through this, before I decided I had to get a review box up. XD I mean to read straight until the end, I swear. xDD But... Laughing...

Funny Things:

The line of "L"s as a page breaker

Random laughing

"Drop dead and have some demon steal my body"

"Hot dre- NEVERmind!"

Revelation 101

3rd person

King Kong



...Cute dumb ass?

"Thatz Kitchel weirdness"


butterflies! -

"You ate my damned ins-I mean, Faerie!"
cutiek028 chapter 1 . 12/3/2004
OMG! OMG! OMG! I LOVED IIT! NO ONE BETTER DARE FLAME THIS FANFIC! OMG! It was so great. Thatz was soo cute and funny. And I love Thatz and Kitchel, botha s charecters and as a pairing. OMG! U just HAVE to make another chapter. Maybe in Kitchels POV! It was so cool and sweet. If you like Thachels too u can email me or something. But I beg of u, make another one! BTW, I put you in my fave stories list. It was a perfect story! . Bye!
aquajogger chapter 1 . 7/22/2004
Lol, I'm a bit late, no?


Anyway, I read this story when it just came out, and have read it uncountable times after that.

It's on my favorites list.

I even have a copy in appleworks.

I'm a little scary. *sweatdrop*

I just wanted to(finally) tell you HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS STORY!

This was the first decent Thatchel I have ever read, and has paved the way for my ThxKit obsession.

Whether or not that is a good thing is still being determined.

So thank you VERY much for writing and posting this, because this story continues to be an insperation to me, even to this day, and I hope you will accept my apologies for reviewing so late!

Many, many happy returns, Ally
knowwii chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
Awsm!More stories!
chaotic pink chocobo chapter 1 . 3/7/2004
hey thisw is pretty good
Bloodfoxxx chapter 1 . 10/26/2003
wow.. that was diffent. O.o;

cant say i didnt like it though! XD
Me chapter 1 . 4/25/2003
I HATE THATCHUEL! but it was funny D besides...THATS SUPPOSE TO BE ME NOT KITHUEL ME ME ME ME ME ME ME! O.o.. Thatz is mine so bugger off everyone else

CNCfreak chapter 1 . 3/28/2003
COOL!Make more storys like it seems that every story bout DK is yaio GR Good job
Aki-chan the Yaoi-Lover chapter 1 . 3/21/2003
Very good story. Your grasp of the characters is excellent. Also, it is good to see new plots/pairings. Write more soon!
Laenavesse chapter 1 . 3/21/2003
aw that's rather cute - Some grammatical erros tho P lol XD but i liked it! It was a little confusing wondering where was where and what was thoughts and actual words...or were they all thoughts? o.O anyway, i still liked it D