Dumb ending. The angst was building up well until you killed it all with the last line. Impromptu fluff much? I would also add that your author's notes killed some potentially poignant/well written lines. Way to ruin a story.

umm...

...I THOUGHT YOU LIKED SENKOSH?

question..: did sen leave kosh or kosh left sen?

girl, you're breaking my heart...

Not bad... I dont' normally read FujiSen, don't know what came over me today... ah well, nice one! Gambatte ne, write more!

-Levi-

(Leviathan)

That was really good... [cries from over-emotion]

yipee! senfuji! angsty but cute!