Reviews for Vanilla Icing
Ghost Captain Barbossa chapter 2 . 9/6/2003
OH! Please update! this is great!_
Oni no Miko chapter 1 . 4/10/2003
Hey ;; thanks for all the reviews guys!

PK: Sorry, I didn't have a spell check on my computer, or even Mircosoft Word, all I have is notepad ;. Also, Nanaka and Akane are treating Sae like a little kid, cause I see Sae as being more submissive and meek. Akane also acts very mature as well as Nanaka. I think I made Akane a bit to ditzy though ;;. The lemon comment at the end was there because I put this on my website and just copied and pasted it into notpad and put it on here. I forgot to remove that, I know you arent allowed to pt lemons on T.T

Aya Rose: I might! Shounen ai can never be bad!

Thanks guys! I'm starting on the 2nd chapter, but if it goes lemon then Im onlyl going to post it on my website.

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Aya Rose chapter 1 . 3/27/2003
Wow, this plot sounds really fun, I hope you do more with it.

Though Aya and Takeo aren't that bad, maybe the should show up?

Of course, you actually have Akane there! And she speaks even! Isn't that a fanfiction first or something? Oh well, good work!
Elanor Whiteriver chapter 1 . 3/25/2003
Well, interesting. The plot is going somewhere, but you might look into a quick spell-check(just a suggestion!) Another thing - why are Akane and Nanaka treating Sae like she's a little kid? Sae is older than Akane...but I suspect you know that. Anyhow, I just can't see that happening. I really don't want to flame! Great story. Please continue...just thought you might want to know, doesn't allow lemons anymore.

Keep writing!
Pineapple-7Up chapter 1 . 3/23/2003
This was funny and interesting at the same time! You should most diffently write more. I know I'll read it. _