Reviews for The Blond Mother Lover
Guest chapter 16 . 4/17/2019
Naruto ntr ino because sai calls him dickless, so naruto Deflower ino as a payback to sai! Shigure from history strongest disciple!
Destru chapter 16 . 4/17/2019
Congratuations for completing your first story. Very nice developments for the sequel and I will be looking forward to your next stories ;)
Luciendar chapter 16 . 4/17/2019
Man I've loved this story. I'm so glad i stuck around. It has been an amazing read and I'm proud to have been with you on this journey since the early chapters. I was always flattered to receive your quick and well thought out responses. If you need any help in the future please let me know.
kirashu chapter 16 . 4/17/2019
Well, firstly i wanted to say: Thank you for sharing this story with us and congrats for completing it.

Interesting story, of course a little cliché because Naruto x Harem and Naruto x Kushina x Mikoto BUT it was good.
The plan to slowly destroy Minato's mind, the date between Naruto and Kushina, Mikoto's jealousy, Kushina and Mikoto NOT lesbian, Itachi' self destruction are among the best moments and ideas i love in this story... yeah good job here. I am happy to add this story in my favorite list.

I am, of course, very curious about Kaguya's and Miya's turn with our favorite blond. I am sure, this two will be the most interesting to read, out of all the member of his harem not taken yet.
I will not be surprised if Izumi and Kaguya will be the catalyst needed for Naruto to pursue others women and well with Miya, well she is so against it that i will love to see her beg for it in the end... but how will you do it ? That, is what i want to know in a sequel :p.
godofhell969 chapter 1 . 4/17/2019
Waiting for harem sequel! it was awesome that you completed the story many authors start to write many stories at once but they never get completed in my favorite list only noodle hammer has completed his 4 fictions and now you.
Dr.Sad Guest chapter 16 . 4/17/2019
That has been a long journey eh? An amazing one at that and now the finale has come, and it simply was depravity/purity mixed into one fine package!

You remained loyal to your character's personality which stayed till the end.

There's always going to be mistakes here and there but those are always what makes an aspiring author grow into a fine writer as they learn from it.

But to rate everything in this fic that you've written the overall rating for me would be a... 9.6/10!
And I can't wait for the sequel!

As for the one-shots you could make a patreon if it launches properly and successfully! You could do commissions there (although some commissions might be weird/downright disturbing you'll get used to it... Probably) .

Forgive me for not reviewing the last chapter properly, these days hasn't been kind to me. But I'm glad that you're coming up from your rock bottom.

And as always!
Good luck out there mate!
psp reader chapter 15 . 4/17/2019
uhh, this end real or a pause? thanks for sharing
REVANOFSITHLORD chapter 16 . 4/17/2019
well I wait if sequel coming
und3rw0rld chapter 15 . 4/15/2019
Is tsunade gonna join the harem before izumi or what is the plan?

All in all great chapter!
Guest chapter 14 . 4/15/2019
a sinto :( pela morte dos seus familiares
Guest chapter 15 . 4/15/2019
achei bem legal tava começando a acha que tinha parado de fazer a Fanfic e espero que a próxima seja tsunader ou tsume então por favor continua
helrio uzugaku chapter 15 . 4/14/2019
I swear I MUST have died during my laughing fit. Don't think I don't see what your planning with Izumi. She gets a request to join Koyuki on stage conveniently around the same time Koyuki comes to Konoha in order to get into Naruto's pants, suggesting only after realizing she failed that she'll hire him later. While all of this is happening Itachi is going through the emotional rollercoaster of acceptance, denial, self hate, begrudging acceptance and finally blissful conclusion. Your planning on getting Naruto to seduce her during whatever is going on with Koyuki, or the other way around.

I can see Itachi's treatment burying his bodily desires and during the trip he'll most likely catch Naruto in the act and reawaken that buried part of him.

I also must have missed the fight with irene. Don't remember it, I'll ve to go back and read last chapter but it should be interesting from what i read here. I'm really hoping your going to go through 2ith my earlier suggestion of cuckolding Ay using Mabui. The big bad Ill tempered Raikage being turned into a cuck by his rivals son with a larger cock than his own. The sheer shock factor is enough to get me chuckling.

So far I like what I'm seeing. I really have no complaints. Even Naruto's current contentment with the women he's got is actually something I like. Being greedy only leads to suffering down the line, not to mention a shorter pan more often than not.

I'd actually like to request something from you. Theres a fic I had read a few years ago that I felt had tons of potential if handled just right but the author abandoned it. It was published in 2013 and hasn't been updated at all but even just one chapter in and I felt like the fic dying was a shame worth crying over. The title "I need a Drink" written by "modify the lifestream". The thing that hooked my attention at the time was the fact it was a time travel/dimension jumping fic and a scene with Minato and kushina that I hadn't seen before, at least l much later. Kushina walked into Minato's office catching him with his pants down and his dick shoved into his secretary. That obviously ended with Minato being brutalized and the secretary possibly being left infertile, not much info on her. Skipping ahead A naruto from and alternate dimensions future drops into the story and meets Kushina at a bar. You seem like the kunda guy that can do the math from here. I would live to see that story, or a story eerily similar to it pop up. Think you can do it?

I really don't care if it becomes a harem or if Naruto stays faithful, but from what i read in this fic I have q gut feeling you'll pick harem. I just want to see a good fic get revived. The only thing that has to be a must is the two get together relatively quick. Not something i normally encourage, but my logic is kushina seems like the spiteful type when well and truly pissed off, what better way to show her spite of Minato than getting together with another man almost as soon as she breaks up with him? I would love to see Minato squirm a bit, maybe even get obsessive.

Well I've officially made this review longer than it needed to be, sry bout that. I'll finish it off by saying I love what your doing here and hope to see more. Good luck on your future works.
FanFicFreak6669 chapter 1 . 4/13/2019
For the record, this isn't really netorare. It's more netori than anything.
BELLAMI0NE chapter 15 . 4/12/2019
I'm glad your feeling better now after your family members death. Another great chapter, as always. Just remember to look after yourself above else.
ReaperOfBalance chapter 15 . 4/12/2019
Heh, I could see Kaguya telling the girls he has, “The only reason you’re alive is because I don’t want him to hate me. If I knew his heart wouldn’t close off from loving me, I would kill you now and claim him as my one and only. However, I can’t bring myself to hurt him in any way, shape, or form, thus I won’t harm you so long as you do not attempt to harm me.”
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