Pretty chill ending there. I was sort of expecting a sitrep on the uchihas and hokage tho. Frankly, I haven't actually read any of the other series mentioned in the crossovers. I think I watched the sekirei anime as a kid but that's it. I think your intro to grayfia and the dxd situation needs more work. Same with that dragon lady from iwa. Miya is explained more concisely, since you basically just go over the concept of winging which is what matters. Dxd seems like a really convoluted plot and the dragon lady is lacking details imo.
I liked how you're so adamant about straight women not succumbing to the lesbian fruit. I read so much haremshit that three()some instantly equates to soft yuri play, but clearly that's just the male fantasy. It's like how in an mmf threesome you don't see the guys getting into the heat of the moment and sucking each other off... Most of the time.
So bijuu isn't even a thing in this series? I think that's a bit of lost potential there. Sure the existence of bijuus and by consequence jinchuuriki has caused a lot of grief in the series, but with how you twist the plot, I think you could have done something interesting with the tailed beasts. Speaking of, you did cameo them as movies with bad plot, and I hope you can do more of those 4th wall breaks in the sequel.
Take care and cheers!

Incredible chapter once again! I must admit, kaguyas appearance was kind of out of nowhere. If it wasn't for the previous chapter notes confirming her as a lover, I'd have been forced to call bs.
I suppose kaguya is a lot more in control of her faculties and is an intelligent woman in this fic? I find her the hottest milf in the narutoverse but hate what they did with her in the series. I almost wish she didn't exist so as to not have the plot make any less sense. Kaguya is basically Blondie's Hinata in this timeline with all the stalking she's doing. I trust that the future chapters will do her justice!
Also, I can't believe Kushinas chains barely cracked a rib. Now that's what I call godly naruto. Where does he even find the time to get so OP? I shouldn't ask these questions I know.
The Uzumaki vs Uchiha scenes were so intense! I need a whole retelling of naruto with Kushina and mikoto replacing the main characters now... Sakura's role can be replaced by minato with how useless he is lol. Anyways, fantasies aside. I'm sorry your poll got hacked. But this is how things are on the internet. With your novel dealing with such depraved subjects with great prose, it's no wonder you'd attract the attention of some smartasses.
Don't let it get you down. With every vocal reviewer like myself out there, there has to be a hundred more who silently appreciate.

Again, I'm halfway into this chapter, and I'm compelled to review. The situation with Minato is hilarious, making his secretary to that. I also fully respect your decision to make it a love triangle... Of sorts. Since both miko and kushi are strong kunoichi and highly possessive too. It's easy to remove logic when reading harem novels with girls happy to be sharing and sometimes even encouraging it, but at the end of the day, humans are all selfish, and it's that raw emotion that's being expressed in this fic that's driving me crazy over it.
One thing I find lacking is the presence of the other konoha 9 other than Sasuke. Seriously the only passing mention of them are something along the lines of, they can't possibly handle Naruto's one eyed monster. But limiting the characters to only those needed for the plot is a good way to keep focused on what's important I'll admit. But as a fanfic of such a long and convoluted series, I sort of expect a sit rep on what's what. Sure the plot has highly deviated from canon, but I certainly don't know by how much.

You know it's a good story when I can't even wait to finish the chapter before revving up this bitch. I'm finding Naruto of this fic to be the most evil version I've had the pleasure to read. Not mindless brooding murderhobo evil, but calm, collected and calculating but completely attuned with his carnal side. I actually feel bad for minato since we haven't seen him actually doing anything wrong. Naruto has meticulously arranged it so that he fails in his marriage for years. I wouldn't be surprised if danzo was his bitch in this timeline XD

Absolutely delicious. First half of this chap is more like Kushina getting NTRed lol

BTW it takes around an hour and a half to read this chapter for me so be warned this is a long story

Talk about a long, wild ride. I loved this marvelous, detailed fic from beginning to the end, and I really hope for a sequel to this soon.

Happy Writing!

Yo i know this story is completed and you've got new stuff released (which funnily enough i had read without knowing the author was you, such as man of the house), but I wanted to drop a review to let you know I really appreciate how thoroughly this fic was fleshed out, and were able to genuinely bring the characters to life. Letting them be human and have real reactions, instead of just being like fuck that porn logic it's accepted because that's the way I want it to be.
Thanks for your hard work

so Erza is dead ?

Best MILF story I've read.

A really good story but I'm not sure if this harem idea of yours is a good idea. I liked it better with just the original two pairings and I also like how unique your story is which is rare in fanfiction. Well, the fanfiction that I read anyway (M-100k-Completed).

Thanks for your time and effort!

You fell into the trap of listening to your fans more then yourself, don't bother with polls, you'll only frustrate yourself. This story is really good, so good, that even a lurker like me feels the need to review. For every hundred chapters I read I only post about ten reviews, that doesn't mean a story is bad it's just that I'm usually too eager to press the 'Next' button.

With this story, believe it or not, I focus more on the romance and emotions then on the admittedly boxer straining lemons. This chapter felt real, so bravo! I also agree with you that harem stories tend to make the ladies into some kind of unidimensional gestalt and the bigger the harem becomes the more ladies fade to the background. Also with how virile you've made your Naruto a gangbang would be pretty pointless as the ladies can't last against even one of him. That's not saying Kage Bunshins can't be used to spice things up but some stories just go way overboard in their clone usage.

waiting for sequel

wha–what about Itachi and Sasuke? they...they saw them right? they were there! i'm sure of it, using Sharingan! they saw everything~
well, dammit.. i knew it they were there! lol . also, that was a fun read! nice~

There's a lot of problems with this story. It's repetitious as fuck, you seem to have strange delusions about anal, and you make very strange word choices. I'd like much more of a "plot" than there currently is, to balance out all the sex, but you mostly focus on sex and little else. This is made worse by every sex scene sounding like something thought up by a 12 year old who just discovered boners.

That said, we do share similar tastes in women and I'm all about Kaguya potentially joining things. Kaguya's entire existence in the Naruto canon made zero sense and was random as fuck, but damn if she wasn't hot.

As far as the harem goes (I know this story is complete, but still), my biggest disappointment was the unnecessary exclusion of girls from Naruto's generation. Naruto is 18, so everyone else must be about 17-19 or near enough. Many of the girls in his generation are thick and sexy as can be in the epilogue/post-Naruto content. So, even if they weren't "MILF-y" during Naruto canon, they're close enough to the age where they /do/ start radiating that energy. Excluding them seems like a mistake to me. The cuck focus is amusing but I don't see the need it making his every relationship revolve around that.

Particularly when it comes to Hinata and Ino. Both are very sexy in their late teens/early 20s. Both would be fun to dominate. One is shy and eager to impress. The other is bratty and overly self-confident. Breaking her sounds like the kind of thing Naruto would like to do.

Oh well.