Reviews for The Blond Mother Lover |
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![]() ![]() Holy shit that was one hot chapter! Glad to see a person who's making Naruto the dominant force instead of that Sasuke retard stealing chicks. Keep up the good fucking work dude! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chapter pretty sexy. Just don’t like other guys watching and getting off |
![]() ![]() ![]() seems like a gret story, I hope to see it getting updated |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter bro |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hopefully one day you'll make a prequel story, going into detail Mikoto's seduction from housewife to slut |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing. Next chapter please :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lmao at Jiraiya being on board cuz he's a super pervert, I died when he said Minato was a tool. Lmao the descriptions are pretty funny when you debscribe it I just can't take it serious and laugh. Won't lie it was pretty weird reading about Fugaku, Itachi and Sasuke's jerking off but shit was funny with how you did it with the Uchiha submissive genes. Enjoying this story so far. LOL I can't, Fugaku thanking Naruto for busting a nut in his wife has me crying. Pretty solid start so far. Just curious will we be seeing a sort of plot or is this just without plot besides the seducing Kushina. Until next time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Normally I don't bother with cheating fics, but I read "Naruto/Kushina" in the summary and clicked since I'm an Uzumakicest lover myself. I expected to read some pretty bad porn. I have to say that I'm quite taken back with the level of writing because you're actually good! Really good! It's great to have authors who can write smut that is legible. So congrats on that! I will admit that the anal sex scene was one of the best I've read on this site. In my opinion you've displayed some serious skills while describing the hurdles Mikoto went through when Naruto was penetrating her. It's a little embarrassing to say that, but I just wanted to put it out there that I really enjoyed reading all that detail. It's like I could actually visualize the scene. Be sure to include such detail in your future sex scenes, especially in your NaruKushi scenes! Oh man I'm really looking forward to read how Naruto is going to seduce Kushina. I can offer you a suggestion. Maybe you can have Naruto take Kushina out for a date and then seduce her over the period of the date by showing her through his actions he's better for her than Minato. You're most welcome to message me and I can further clarify this scene for you if you're interested. Anyhow, excellent job on the first chapter. Hope you can update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice loving this so far is naruto going to get all mothers i would love to see him break Mebuki (sakura’s mom) especially for all the crap she gives him... and Tsume she needs an alpha ;) looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good luck man story I like this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter Yes finally a story where fugaku is a cockhold and naruto is the main dude and not the other me being cockhold Can’t wait for more Please continue Damn would be cool if naruto went fucken around with like other girls to have fun and maybe have them as concubines but mikoto and kushina are his main girls his queens Like tsunade and Mei and Anko and Konan would be great for naruto |
![]() ![]() left a review last time but turns out your fanfic was deleted i said in my review that i saw a review that was suggesting kushina and mikoto fight over who gets to fuck naruto and i think that is a good suggestion, no chakra or anythng just catfight, loser has to watch naruto fuck the winner |
![]() ![]() great chapter keep it up and happy Christmas |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story. I have a suggestion for next chapter. Have Minato to go for some time (a week, a few weeks, or whatever you want) for bussiness or alliance issue. In that time, have Naruto seduce Kushina with 'accidental' groping, flashing, or kissing. Or you can have Naruto fucking Mikoto in his room so Kushina can hear it and become horny to go with 'fuck it' and join the fun. Sorry if there is a grammar mistake in this review. |
![]() ![]() This is actually the best thing I've ever read. Good fucking job mate, merry fucking christmas and shit. |