Reviews for Expecting the Unexpected
Guest chapter 23 . 9/8
Cute. Nice short story. I think the year apart was a great idea and a credit to Snape.
Lucius adopting Hermione? Brilliant.
Thanks for sharing.
TriDogMom chapter 1 . 8/7
I didn't realize you also wrote An Indecent Proposal. I read that the other day and loved it too. You're very talented
TriDogMom chapter 23 . 8/7
This story was fantastic! Read it all in one day.
Gill4623 chapter 23 . 8/3
Fab story - loved it. Thanks for sharing
Mel Crooks chapter 23 . 7/11
This was absolutely fantastic.
mckenziecd chapter 23 . 7/6
You’re a fantastic author!
Fantomette34 chapter 23 . 5/12
Thank you for this beautiful story ! Bellatrix's curse on Severus allowed a great and beautiful love story to be born between the wizard and Hermione...
See you soon, I hope :)
TheEdgeOfTheDeepGreenSea chapter 23 . 4/20
Lovely story and easy to read. I expected more smut with the M rating, and it did feel like some things happened quite quickly. Nice fic though!
Gia chapter 23 . 4/18
Very good fan fiction. Humorous and serious the same time, and I love Lucius in this fan fiction. Especially as Hermiones adopted father
Sassyluv chapter 23 . 4/14
Loved the way it ended. Sorry it took so long for me to get to finishing it.
Sassyluv xxx
Kushka chapter 23 . 4/11
Good story
gisela19wwe chapter 23 . 4/10
just beautiful!
woodyt chapter 23 . 4/7
wow that was amazing. Thank you so much for sharing x
Guest chapter 23 . 4/1
Thank you for sharing your story.

It was well written and had several original plot points.
Ms. Anthrop chapter 23 . 3/10
Ohhh, what sweet epilogue! I do like their life together- it's what they both deserve!

You've written a really lovely story that played well with the useable bits of canon while neatly disregarding the foolish bits- brava! As I said earlier, I really, really appreciate that you've chosen to write a story where everyone comes together to defeat Moldypants rather than everyone splintering into lone-ranger death missions. For all that Dumbledore spoke of love, he showed very little of it, and indeed, only a surface understanding of how important it is. Your treatment of Snape- as well as the Malfoys, and Hermione- was far kinder than in the books; it was nice to not have them grimly march alone to their fates. I also really like that this wasn't super-hero Snape and Granger against the world- you kept their wider bonds of friendship, and they proved just as important as the romantic ones.

Well done, and looking forward to reading more from you!
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