Why capture known terrorists? Kill em and be done with it, they escaped once they can escape again!

Ok no, the 2 of them are far too young and unready for that kind of relationship. You've rushed that way too fast, and way too young.

Victoire is Bill and Fleur's eldest, and she is 2 years younger than Teddy not 1, so Fleur wouldn't be having a child yet.

What did Draco do to deserve Azkaban? You said for the death of Dumbledore, but Malfoy didn't kill Dumbledore, Snape did. Everything else was under duress, and he didn't kill anyone and the only people he tortured were other death eaters on Voldy's threat of facing it himself - I'd have thought House Arrest at most.
Or have you changed what he did from canon?
Similar question with Snape, is the punishment for what he did before he became a spy?

No way telling the Weasleys they are together AND getting married at the same time goes down well. They'd all think they'd need more time, and Molly would throw a fit. The engagement being kept secret from the family is understandable, but not hiding the fact that they were even together. That's just silly, as it is in every fic with that 'plotline'.
And while Ginny is intelligent, I don't think she'd get that many NEWTs, if any, a year early, especially seeing as they barely learnt anything in the first part of the year, so it'd be a rush job to try and learn it all especially 2 years worth of material. Nah.

Harry actually has the greatest motivation of anyone to want to be an Auror, he has his saving people thing, he can never sit back and leave things to others so no way would he not want to hunt down dark wizards rather than leave it to someone else, and he'd want to make sure no one else went through what he did. This is all central to his character!

Then it IS Hedwig's chick? Surely they'd be able to know that, no other Snowy owls would've been near London, but then how did she mate?

Good basic concept but very OOC in every way possible.

Now this is the Ginny and Harry we should have had in cannon!

good

Hermione is very arrogant

What a beautiful story! Thank you ever so much for sharing it with us.

this needs an epilogue maybe 10to 15 years later you know success and children I wanna know how the zoo and his practice grow not mention the close bond with newts family

She is serious?

I love all your HP stories. You make the world seem bigger, more magical and that the wizarding world does not end at hogwarts. Most FF authors can never let go of the concept of hogwarts.

Hello,
I love your story, I was so in to it that I was so sorry it ended! I could just see as they worked on the zoo, their children running around getting into so much trouble, getting in the in areas where the animals are not being afraid, to make friends with them! Oh well thanks for the ride! I'm such a H&G fan. Thanks again.

Good story! Would like to know that all would be well with the Longbottoms, and if the Potters had kids, and how many. Also if their chosen careers worked for the long term.

Good story

According to JKR the exchange rate for Galleons to Pounds was that one Galleon equal to 4.9 pounds.

Really loved it.

Fun story

I like it... well done!