|Reviews for On the Outside|
| SunnyDe chapter 10 . 10/30/2014
I don't know how I just came across your ric but I wanted to tell you that is amazing. It truly is. Its addressing so much that we never got to see in the anime or manga. I really love it! Maybe one day you'll finish it. :)
| mamita chapter 10 . 1/26/2014
Hello, I really like your fic, especially since RyuxTat couple, love, see that it is not a perv Tatsuha as it seems or as they say and look like Ryuichi is not an innocent child as they see or say, I love this couple provided that Tat is the uke, lol, I love how Ryu dominates and perplexing, is well, all bad sometimes with Tat, hopefully finish all your fics of these two together, thanks and kisses.
| mamita chapter 10 . 10/23/2011
Hello Kirachu fic I've loved you, hopefully very soon to follow, I love this couple Ryuichi / Tatsuha, and I like even more cuanso Ryuichi is seme and uke Tatsuha is, I love, I hope they do more fics, continues, thanks and kisses.
| Beck chapter 8 . 6/10/2009
Wow...I am in awe. This is probably one of the best Gravitation fics I have read since my introduction to the series(and I've been browsing the internet in search of good Gravitation fics for DAYS now). Mostly, I've been able to find several well written Gravitation stories but a lot of what I've been reading is just mediocre. I'm quite pleased to find something that's actually quite interesting as well as well written. I'm not a big fan of Tatsuha but I love the way you write him and especially the way you've written Eiri and Shuichi. I'm not sure if you plan on continuing this, since it's been a while since you last updated, but I'm praying that you will. :)
| Carapheonix chapter 10 . 6/2/2009
Uhm... is this story on permanent hiatus or something? If it isn't, please update soon. I really want to read this!
| ss10009 chapter 10 . 7/14/2008
If this isn't a great story, I don't know what is. Your characterizations were brilliant. I love the Tatsuha in this story. He's absolutely perfect. Your story grips with me with how he interacts with his family. The portion where he's mentioning about he won't cry for his father is written excellently. Another great part is his interaction with Ryuichi. Its great how you've worked this story out- its got its little humor points that make you smile or laugh, it has the characters little nuances, and then it has the perfect angst that isn't overdone or anything, it's just natural. You really bring Tatsuha to life.
It makes me feel really sad to know that chances are, this story won't get finished. But maybe, just maybe you planned on publishing chapter eleven nearly six years later...? A reader can wish.
| Silver chapter 10 . 6/16/2007
Just wanted to tell I really really liked the story and the way you captured the Characters, especially Tatsuha and Ryuichi (and its real hard to find a well written, interesting Ryuichi). Its really sad that this will probably never be finished.
| ilocanoheero chapter 10 . 7/14/2006
For the most part i am speechless. You did a wonderful job on the story and i'm amazed at how you made the story flow so well. I love how indepth you made Tatsuha here, (his my favorite character). This was pretty tear jerking and i'm kind of dissapointed that you haven't updated in a while, but i know what its like being an author and i hope that you get the insparation to finish this.
| Sherry Marie chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
This story is absolutely excellent. It has been forever since I have read Gravitation fanfic and this has completely blown me away. The characters are portrayed perfectly, the story line just grabs you, and the relationships (or hints of them) are lovely.
Wonderful wonderful job!
| v son sayian chapter 10 . 2/5/2006
aw *looks at date* U well, it's certainly been awhile since you updated...I hope you continue this fic sometime though, you've done a really good job! I'm excited to see what happens next...will he see ryuuichi again, what will happen with his dad, what other family problem will come up?
| Petitejam chapter 10 . 1/5/2006
I Love this fic! I love Tatsuha's cynical yet humorous perspective. This is probably my first fully centralised Tatsuha fic, well his POV anyone. Everyone else is characterized wonderfully, I love Shuuichi, how he does have some sense of modesty, Yuki Eiri is very canon, silent stoic arsehole but you can't help loving types. All those hints and pills though don't look like a happy outcome at this point you aren't going to drop a bomb on me are you? Ryuuichi is still an enigma, at first I thought he had something for Shuu (which made my inner Ryu/Shu fangirl squeal) I'm still not sure but he does seem to be the dom currently. I feel for Tatsuha in his outsiders placing, there but not there, attached but dettached. And when you wrote Tatsuha doesn't 'brood' hehe well maybe he can be pensive, what do you think? ;; I love the writing style of this fic! And I love the direction it's going, the only prob so far I can see is that its not completed! This scene really struck me out though, the one after concert where Shu tells Yuki to go home I can so picture it!
"Yuki, kairu yo.." Yuki's about to argue, "Iya, I'm tired anyway, Kairu.." Endearing, deep on some other level look. They leave.
(I just really remember those words from Kimi wa Petto Dorama *Matsujun
| thelly chapter 10 . 11/24/2005
dude, i am like light years late getting into this fic. O.O[LOL] BIT I MIGHT ADD, IT IS BLOODY FRIGGIN AWESOME. OH, I WAS JUST TURNED ON TO GRAVI. THOUGH MY FAV CHARCATERS ARE HIRO AND EIRI, I ALSO HAVE A LIKING FOR TATSUHA-CHAN. THIS FIC IS REALLY GOOD, I HOPE U FIND THAT NICHE AND FINISH IT SOON, MUCH LOVE AND PRAISE-THELLY
| dashgurl19 chapter 10 . 10/10/2005
This is quite possibly one of the best fanfics I've ever read. This is really, really good. It's funny, it's moving, it's everything. I hope you continue with this.:D
| minorsky chapter 10 . 6/27/2005
Wow, I love the way you capture the chemistry between the characters. Everyone is in tempo and your fic is not forced, which is great.
A pity you didn't continue it though, as I'm sure many readers, including myself, are very curious as to what happens next.
But anyway, well done for what you have done.
| princessares chapter 10 . 6/22/2005
This is, by far, one of the best works of fanfiction ever. Not one of the characters are OOC, nor is the pace too fast. Kudos to you for capturing the growing teen and putting my face through a range of expressions while reading your work. I truely marvel at your ability to capture the characters of Gravitation and develop them realistically. I have no idea how else to continue without freaking you out with my thanks...
I wish you'd never stopped writing for the Gravitation fandom, not just this fic - purely for selfish reasons, I assure you. I haven't written a review in ages, but for the justice you've restored to fanfiction, I couldn't help but stop to rave a little to show my gratitude.
Now I'm sure I've really made a fool of myself, so... Good luck with your current works! :-)